A pack of their own Comments
Visitor
very good book to read, i recommend it, definitely keeps you wanting more
06/10/2025 02:39Visitor
Great book and a wonderful story. Well written and can't stop reading the story. Weldon and best wishes
06/09/2025 23:17Patricia P. Preston
I'm enjoying this book thus far. Can't wait to see what happens next.
06/09/2025 01:17Visitor
wonderful book,good story line, interesting,fantastic, best wishes to you
06/08/2025 13:31Visitor
it’s really good so far. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen as the story progresses.
06/08/2025 12:00Robin Moses Corum
this was a good book
06/07/2025 20:02Visitor
so far this book is good. not finished yet but will
06/06/2025 21:50Diane Addison-Martin
This was a great read with an awkward abrupt end.
06/06/2025 19:55Patricia P. Preston
I am liking the story so far. It's upsetting to see the blatant favoritism, & mistreatment between the kids. It's so unfair.
06/06/2025 07:16Niuris Ramos
I'm greatly enjoying this book, I haven't finished it yet but it's great.
06/04/2025 20:01Felicia De Leon
I loved this book but I wish the ending wasn't so rush and that they had couple of epilog.
06/04/2025 18:50Matthew Osborne
I am loving this book. I can't wait to unlock all of it.
06/04/2025 16:32Shannon Marrone
completely loved the store so wished it wouldn't end . would love to see how the pack turns out and read Liam's story.
06/03/2025 12:13Visitor
I couldn't put it down once I picked it up!
05/31/2025 19:32Visitor
lovely story
05/30/2025 20:32Erin Buelow
love the book just wish there was a part two to it so we get to see there lifes a little bit more.
05/29/2025 14:29Visitor
lovely story
05/29/2025 13:59Crystal Nightray
the story is awesome. I enjoy how much character development is taking place across the board
05/25/2025 21:56Melissa Renfro
I really like this story. I was really invested but I feel like after the attack the rest of the story got rushed, and there were a lot of loose ends.
05/21/2025 01:04Visitor
it is so cool you write about my home town 😆 🤣 😂
05/18/2025 23:01Visitor
Really enjoyed this story,you did very well for your first time,get you a spell checker and start that second book🍾🎉🎊🌹❤️🙏. Congratulations 👏
05/14/2025 00:32Visitor
I didn't like the ending. I hope there is a book 2.
05/11/2025 19:36Cassy Rose
you need to either continue with a part2 or a book 2
05/07/2025 03:06Visitor
The book was good. We didn't get to know how her parents felt that Jessoe is dead. Why didn't Keska get to confront her dad and mom because they enabled Jessie especially her mom. How do you forget you have a middle child? A lot of these were left unsaid. Why did her parents treat Keska like that? Why didn't her grandma talk with her daughter? just my thoughts.
05/06/2025 18:44Visitor
I really love the book. I like getting everyone's point of view. I read a lot and I read fast. this is one of my favorite books. I get so giddy when a update comes. keep it up Author you are doing great!
05/03/2025 16:08Frances Smith
any updates???
04/29/2025 03:58Jacqueline Alexander
hoping for more updates. I'm now very invested in their stories
04/28/2025 13:14Visitor
when will there be an update
04/27/2025 19:31Visitor
Sara already said she didn't make the smoothie! That should have raises serious flags!
04/23/2025 23:01Stephanie Graziano
the last few chapters have been good. can't wait for more chapters. at chapter 181.
04/22/2025 01:44Lil Sis
we went from 20 chapters for the same half day to zooming through 3 months in a sentence. 🤦🏻♀️
04/22/2025 01:01Visitor
For something tha is a secret, I am surprised at how many people they have told.
04/21/2025 15:50Visitor
man, I've already binge read the book and keep wanting more. keep it going I'm getting antsy with what is going to happen next
04/19/2025 14:44Visitor
Why does the writing keep going and the page is cutoff but we miss out on parts going to the next page?
04/10/2025 13:02Sapete Dodson
umm Keska i'm not sure where you get your expectations. why would you expect to know everything going on in the pack.?? i mean nobody knows things going on in thier neighbors lives
04/08/2025 22:42Shona Bullock
I really like the story idea and the characters and concept, but why is it moving soo slowly and filled with too much fluff ? You seem to be dragging the story along we already have a two year wait for the two girls to be of age but at this rate it will actually take two years to read this.
04/08/2025 20:40Michelle White
I've become rather addicted to this story. I know your real life takes precidence, but I can't wait for more updates!!! Thank you for your sharing your creative mind with us.
04/03/2025 21:36Teresa Markee
I'm ready for more chapters it's been a couple of days you normally do it quicker than that I think you got me biting at the bit the kid went upstairs waiting for more God bless you got good talent
04/03/2025 07:54Stephanie Graziano
when will there be more updates? more then just 3 chapter of fluffy
04/02/2025 06:44Visitor
can't wait for more please update soon love this story
03/28/2025 01:53Deanna Landry
Alpha Carmen 23
03/27/2025 10:01Stephanie Armstrong
*does
03/23/2025 02:38Maria
why does the audio cut off for some chapters
03/23/2025 02:18Visitor
I really would like to know more povs from Apollo and Jessie.. how the "taming" goes.. 🤣🤣 couple of povs from Mimi and Jessie exchanging complaints through the pnone about how others are treating them 😇😇😇
03/22/2025 19:10Rose Thorne
Is this book still active?
03/18/2025 13:08Visitor
my favourite book I'm only on chapter 26 but I can't wait to see what happens.
03/17/2025 13:26Bianca
I'm really loving this story but I'm getting real sick of paragraphs getting cut off and not continuing on the next pages.
03/15/2025 13:16Visitor
why so many dang astris Lord u only need like 3 not 300
03/15/2025 01:44Janice H
when will it be updated?????
03/12/2025 16:12Dawn Dumontet
when was the last chapter uploaded... I already finished this in a day!!!!
03/12/2025 03:55Visitor
love the book, would like updates frequently but get the 2 job thing
03/11/2025 20:59Visitor
what happened t9 the rest of the POV for James on chapter 39 4/11 it just cuts off and goes to Keskas pov! I was happy to see James finally coming to his senses!
03/11/2025 15:29E T
Beware: This book does have everyone point of view and repeats of the same thing being said. It also never finishes the point before you jumping to someone talking. Rather annoying.
03/11/2025 14:21E T
I would say this is a good book but I would recommend reading and not listening to it. Also recommend saying POV so it is easier to listen.
03/11/2025 03:09Stephen Gauthier
how often does this update? x.x I read to fast x.x and caught up
03/11/2025 02:08Stephanie Armstrong
*does not dose
03/10/2025 03:39Visitor
love this. can't wait to read more
03/09/2025 21:01Visitor
by the time the sister gets back the whole pack is gonna know
03/09/2025 02:46Visitor
see it cuts of again
03/09/2025 00:47Visitor
some of the sentences just stop mid way. then you turn the page and it's like someone deleted or just jumped ahead. really annoying
03/09/2025 00:29Visitor
i love it but im going broke
03/08/2025 17:49Visitor
I like it but I'm not going broke smh
03/08/2025 13:40Visitor
why cant I get past chapter 78?
03/07/2025 23:56Valerie Dugan
waiting for updated chapters!
03/06/2025 14:58Shatanna Harvey
how ofter is this book updated i want to read more
03/06/2025 00:50Lisa Sheldon
can we stop with all the asterisks please when you use the listen function it reads those too and it is annoying smh but the story is good so far
03/05/2025 17:05Dusty Henderson
dragonsbain22 please update soon.
03/04/2025 01:38Dusty Henderson
How often are the updates? Man I hate starting a book before it's finished. dragonbain22 please 🙏 update I absolutely love this book. One of the best I have read in awhile.
03/04/2025 01:37Visitor
I love this book! However, it would have been great if was complete.
03/01/2025 03:14Visitor
having difficulties getting passed chapter 7 🙄
02/27/2025 13:24Sapete Dodson
Really enjoy the story. i really wanna know what rank Jessies mate is
02/26/2025 14:44Joan Vittorelli
I have all 134 chapters. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I am really enjoying the plot. I hope that there will be a few more updates quickly.
02/24/2025 16:15Visitor
Jessie gets to get away with planning for her sister to be stabbed and kidnapped. She gets a week in the cells and to clean with the others. The other 2 guys die. 🤔🙄
02/23/2025 14:41Visitor
please update really want to keep reading! its a great story
02/23/2025 02:20Visitor
Just found this story. So far, I'm loving it!!
02/22/2025 19:23Bianca Vancraeyveld
love this story so far...
02/22/2025 18:42Visitor
Yes, just loving this book, hope you have time for more updates soon!❤️
02/22/2025 02:40siobhan rogers
so far I love the story . can not wait to see what going to happen.
02/22/2025 01:40Visitor
this is a good story but i think its time to move on passed the obstacle course, the archery, the aikdo lessons and the chores. Devoting whole chapters to these subjects is getting a little redundant.
02/21/2025 16:22Linda Hughes
What is your update schedule? Really enjoying the story and hoping Jessie gets what's coming to her soon
02/20/2025 13:43Visitor
please update
02/20/2025 06:38Visitor
I am enjoying this read please get me more I am invested
02/20/2025 02:21Visitor
while I like the story and has somewhat kept me interested, I'm still trying to figure out what the actual plot is leading up to. Although, it is tedious to read over and over the small mundane tasks in detail each time.
02/18/2025 16:11Visitor
I like how this story is going in great detail on all different people
02/18/2025 14:31Visitor
how much more hate is she going to get before the book picks up. I cannot keep reading about her doing chores and being mistreated for much longer.
02/17/2025 19:45
