His Open Marriage, My Forbidden Secret Comments

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one of the worst pieces of writing ever. child is caspian’s then when Julian tried to h alive himself his letter says it’s his? her pregnancy is progressing backwards. and repetitive chapters but different versions
07/06/2026 03:51
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dumb writer keeps doubling up on chapters with different versions of it.
07/06/2026 01:01
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chapter 65 - his surname has now changed from Nero to Thorne and the brother died from a car accident instead of a gang shooting
07/05/2026 23:22
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chapter 46 is essentially the same as 45 but they changed it. dumb writer
07/05/2026 22:52
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this writer needs to plan their story as the changes throughout make it a really bad one
07/05/2026 22:42
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the story changes when the POV changes was ChatGPT high when writing this?
07/05/2026 22:16

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