Last Female Sypher and Her Brother's Friends Comments
Visitor
enjoying the story overall but feeling it's a little slow paced the differentiation between characters when they speak or when they're thinking would be nice they all kind of blend together at some point
08/16/2026 21:27Visitor
The only thing that's bugging me and throwing me off is you keep mixing up Liam and Theo's name which is really weird especially cuz one of them is Aria's brother and one is her mate.
08/16/2026 15:12Visitor
honestly im in love woth story so far the only wish I had was for there to be some kind of breaks between so many peak points like rolling into action after action with not much context in between gets to become anti climatic but other than that I love the base story line
07/30/2026 06:47