His Unwitting Bride Comments
Visitor
There is no continuity and the facts in story keeps changing which makes no sense at all, there are so many plot holes you should have called this story Swiss cheese. Next time pick a lane and stick to it! Remember what you’ve already written and stop changing details, it just makes it uncomfortable to read. This may be fantasy but at least make it somewhat make sense.
08/04/2026 22:43Visitor
this book is very interesting. it brings me more the excitement
07/31/2026 20:24Visitor
sometimes I feel this book reads like AI
07/29/2026 00:32