Vengeance of the Forsaken Luna Comments
Visitor
Great so far!
07/11/2026 15:08Visitor
ok so far
07/09/2026 21:22Visitor
good so far, but the ai reading voice is awful for audio
07/09/2026 21:22Visitor
it has been an interesting book to read so far.
07/06/2026 12:07Visitor
good
07/05/2026 09:54Visitor
so far so good 👍
07/04/2026 05:12Visitor
i love the main character she is strong and capable!
06/21/2026 05:20Visitor
was great
06/14/2026 16:37green wolf Nation
The narrative itself is compelling. However, several aspects require refinement. Specifically, the timeline necessitates attention, including details such as scene locations. While these are minor points individually, their cumulative effect is significant. I recommend collaborating with an editor to address these details, as doing so will undoubtedly elevate this work to a truly binge-worthy status.
06/13/2026 17:50Visitor
enjoying this story. 😃
06/11/2026 06:28
