THE LUNA THAT RISES FROM THE ASHES Comments

Visitor

the story had potential.. ended up being one of the most poorly written stories I've ever read and I couldn't even finish it because it became so absurd.. the author changes key details every other paragraph like the kids name was Asher then Jackson then Jason then only the mother called The nasher and then it switched to the father only called The Master it would repeat the same scene twice and change key details about it for no reason although I was invested till the end became too absurd.