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Ok, so the bones of the story are hereand they are good. But the devil is in the details, and those are fuzzy in places. Maybe a bit of editing? For example, She's in this supposed huge swim competition... but given the details we know she doesn't seem to swim that well... Also you call out the the fact they're wolves with them scenting in places. You don't think anyone wouldn't know what was going in it that room just by smell... Just saying...