Omega Bound Comments

  • Visitor

    great book thank you to the writer

    07/29/2025 18:22

  • Visitor

    great read this one really enjoying it so far

    07/29/2025 10:36

  • Visitor

    I absolutely loved this story. I've always loved werewolf novels,this one in particular though is fantastic

    07/25/2025 11:24

  • Visitor

    love this book just amazing

    07/25/2025 02:51

  • Veronica White

    i just posted some fun Cyrus reels on my book of face. look me up Veronica White-Author

    07/24/2025 21:37

  • Veronica White

    I made a f-a-c-e-b-o-ok page, Veronica White-Author. Head over there and give me a like. I am going to be making reels based on my stories and uploading some character AI. Come interact!

    07/23/2025 23:54

  • Visitor

    i want to read it..I think it's beautiful story

    07/19/2025 03:56

  • Visitor

    This has me pretty hooked. The characters are being given more depth than many other similar stories. I do hope the development of characters and plot continues throughout the story.

    07/18/2025 18:26

  • Deisy Cardoso

    loving this book so far and the characters 😊

    07/17/2025 22:03

  • Visitor

    just starting but can’t wait to see how this unfolds with all the characters

    07/17/2025 09:34

  • Visitor

    ⭐️

    07/17/2025 05:49

  • Veronica White

    Updates will be much later today on both stories.

    07/16/2025 19:02

  • Visitor

    still in the begining of book but this seems so good this far!

    07/16/2025 04:58

  • Veronica White

    if you want to read a shifter romance that is classic old school werewolf with a morally black male character, and a scarred/disfigured female character-check out my other book "Lia's Redemption" tropes-(one bed, fated mates, rejected mates, second chance mates, hidden gifting, emotional trauma, touch her and die, alphahole, cinnamon roll, enemies to lovers, secrets, feral wolves, normal wolf heats)

    07/16/2025 00:53

  • Darda Peitz

    I l8ke this story it has away of keeping your attention and leaves you wanting more...

    07/15/2025 22:55

  • Visitor

    I've been thoroughly enjoying this story. thank you for giving realistic time frames for things

    07/15/2025 20:13

  • Visitor

    Really enjoying the story so far. It’s a shame we can’t earn more points easier. Or watch video ads to earn points.

    07/15/2025 12:59

  • Tracey Harrison Brown

    Awesome story from an awesome author! Keep up the great work.

    07/14/2025 11:39

  • Monene Mathiba

    for once Cyrus comes through with solid advice

    07/14/2025 02:41

  • Visitor

    I'm throughly enjoying this book thus far. it has everything I need to keep me captivated.

    07/13/2025 21:37

  • Elora VanHorn

    I love this, you got me watching the videos just go read another chapter or two lol 😂

    07/13/2025 02:48

  • Veronica White

    Imagine a world where people read a story to enjoy it............

    07/12/2025 20:18

  • Veronica White

    Does anybody read suspense romance? My editor is requesting I join a writing contest in regard to a storyline of a female lead character trying to solve a crime, problems, haunting etc. Not sure how I feel about it...I'm already planning 'the chronicles of Cyrus' in my head............

    07/12/2025 14:59

  • Adebimpe Ade Abimbola

    Story line is very interesting, it keeps getting better

    07/11/2025 20:30

  • Visitante

    Estoy enamorada de esta novela y eso q acabo empezarla

    07/10/2025 00:25

  • Veronica White

    My first story chapter uploaded to my second again. I'm not sure how it is happening. Just ignore it and I will upload the correct story line soon.

    07/09/2025 20:14

  • Veronica White

    My fist story chapter uploaded to my second again. I'm not sure how it is happening. Just ignore it and I will upload the the correct story line soon.

    07/09/2025 19:00

  • Veronica White

    I'm getting several comments to hurry the story line up and finish it by wrapping up the ring take down. That is difficult since I have Three enemies currently while trying to give the behind the scenes into their lives (they do not work 24/7 on these enemies and the story is more about the individual characters and their growth vs the trafficking ring itself.) Do not fear. I plan on two enemies being revealed through diff POVS at the same time. Think of the fantasy books you read where the last like 100 pages is just a chaotic dumpsterfire of stuff going down.........I do however want to get into Damon's backstory (considering this book three) I'm undecided on Tyler.....I kind of want some nerd love representation.

    07/09/2025 17:54

  • Visitor

    good writing

    07/09/2025 07:28

  • Visitor

    love this book it has some intrigue slot of heartfelt moments and just enough back story to keep it interesting with twists

    07/08/2025 06:13

  • Angel Sacs

    Interesting book

    07/07/2025 22:36

  • Veronica White

    I think I just started forming a shifter romance based on the backstory how the heat inducing drug was made.....................

    07/07/2025 21:33

  • Visitor

    great reading

    07/07/2025 02:48

  • Visitor

    Cyrus just keeps getting better and better! ❤️ him so much, especially with now having a mate who just set his SUV on fire 🤣

    07/06/2025 23:28

  • Sherry Bott

    I absolutely love this story so and can't wait to read more

    07/06/2025 23:23

  • Visitor

    immersed rather then emersed. Great story!!

    07/06/2025 21:10

  • Visitor

    ❤️❤️❤️ Cyrus - and he's SO damned funny!

    07/06/2025 21:06

  • Visitor

    "her eyes "dark" backbup..." s/b 'dart'

    07/06/2025 21:00

  • Visitor

    is book is so good so far. really interesting

    07/06/2025 19:32

  • Christina Adams

    loving this book so far!

    07/06/2025 18:09

  • Mira Cle

    ...wow ...

    07/06/2025 11:35

  • Visitor

    ..."over 'hear' drowning"... s/b "here"

    07/06/2025 06:42

  • Visitor

    ....a whole "knew" level - s/b a whole "new" level...

    07/06/2025 06:03

  • Visitor

    s/b ...'sheer' shock..

    07/06/2025 06:00

  • Visitor

    ...."stregth" s/b "strength" Am not trying to nitpick, it's just ingrained to correct or point out errors, and purposely ignoring punctuation as that doesn't bother me as much. Love this book and you are a very talented writer.

    07/06/2025 05:53

  • Visitor

    "I need "too"" - s/b I need 'to'

    07/06/2025 04:50

  • Samatha Foi

    just started can't wait to finish it

    07/06/2025 03:15

  • Visitor

    "Yes there are "shoked"...S/B shocked

    07/06/2025 02:18

  • Veronica White

    I have 23 chapters currently pending to have the edits I made approved. IF you do not know how these platforms work, you sign away all rights to your work to have it on them unfortunately. So that means I cannot do whatever I want. I was assigned an editor and I write a chapter and submit it. I did not realize it was going straight to the platforms w/o being edited. I think they are maxed out with non english speaking writers (no offense intended) I received approval to go back and start the editing process myself (chapts. are locked to writers after submitted) but the changes still have to be approved. it takes forever. Lesson learned. All is well, we just have to suffer through it for a while.

    07/05/2025 17:47

  • Visitor

    In what universe do female werewolves NOT mark their mate?!? Having read werewolf books/novels for years, mates always mark each other.

    07/04/2025 22:06

  • Veronica White

    I just edited 10 chapters and submitted them to the platforms editor. If you point out any errors after the chapter "Reminder" it isn't as helpful as it would be before the chapter "Reminder." I know it is frustrating finding the errors, but I am frustrated as well learning the chapters are not edited prior to appearing on the platforms.

    07/04/2025 14:46

  • Presu 1215

    nice

    07/04/2025 10:59

  • Veronica White

    Will somebody NOT reading Lia's Redemption please do me a favor and read the about the book section (I don't know what it is called on each platform on how the layout is) and tell me if it is written well to draw the reader in or if I should change it. I am trying to get it seen and wrestled with not revealing too much about the book early because of the plot change. I wanted it to be unexpected and had difficult trying to work around that when describing the book. If you are reading it, you can also give me your opinion if I should change it and/or change it to talk more of Kane without with/wo revealing first major plot change. Thanks!

    07/04/2025 00:31

  • Linese Thompson

    so far so good...can't put it down.

    07/03/2025 20:30

  • Shanda Hernandez

    enjoying books so far

    07/03/2025 13:10

  • Visitor

    "underserving" should be 'undeserving?

    07/03/2025 05:55

  • Visitor

    around my waist - not "waste"

    07/03/2025 04:59

  • Visitor

    ...scraping - NOT "scrapping"

    07/03/2025 01:36

  • Visitor

    love the book so far

    07/02/2025 21:22

  • Visitor

    "...it alot to take in" S/B "...'it's'

    07/02/2025 20:59

  • Visitor

    around HERE - not "her"

    07/02/2025 20:23

  • Visitor

    rouse herself. NOT "arouse"

    07/02/2025 19:55

  • Visitor

    rouse herself NIT "aruse"

    07/02/2025 19:54

  • Visitor

    like it

    07/02/2025 07:14

  • Visitor

    S/B "can't" NOT "can" be ignored...

    07/02/2025 00:10

  • Veronica White

    2025-07-02 Somethings I am addressing related to comments: This book is not finished. I write a chapter and click to submit, then it shows up on the platform. This book is an omegaverse plot with wolf shifters. The heats are omegaverse type heats (lost in lust, begging for an alpha knot whether it is willing or not because of their biology) vs regular werewolf shifter heats. Omegaverse alpha/omega dynamics are different from shifter romance dynamics. However, omegaverses are usually RH's and this one is not due to the size of Thane's...ehem...knot. It is difficult to understand how Ayla can allow Thane to do the things they do together early on without understanding that omega's behave differently/bodies react differently when they are in the presence of an alpha. Had this plot not been an omegaverse trope, the omega would probably be the weak, bottom of the pack shifter in the old school werewolf romance and I didn't want that for her. Also, Della sucks.

    07/02/2025 00:04

  • Visitor

    What make Thane think Aylas brain is "little"? Even if he thinks that just because she hasn't verbalize words, her notes and texts should be enough to prove her intelligence. Give credit to the female protagonist!

    07/01/2025 19:23

  • Chantel Van wyk

    Great story so far, I am definitely hooked and so into the story!

    07/01/2025 19:20

  • Visitor

    "...around 'her'..." S/B "here"

    07/01/2025 18:46

  • Visitor

    Am really enjoying the book, however the goddess/moon goddess is never mentioned, just fate/fates. This is the only werewolf story I've ever read that doesn't mention the Moon Goddess...that's truly my only issue in this story. Everything else has been really good!

    07/01/2025 18:20

  • Visitor

    I honestly didn't think I would like this book but it's really good and the fact we have a funny guy name Cyrus makes better 😂

    07/01/2025 12:34

  • Veronica White

    not going to lie, sometimes it takes me a while to upload some of these chapters because I read it to myself so I can laugh at Cyrus............

    06/30/2025 22:55

  • Veronica White

    Update will take longer since I need to write two chapters for Lia's redemption to make the monthly writing requirement and technically none for this story. I know, it sucks. Just give me a hot minute. Because it is TOO DAMN HOT OUTSIDE. It's actually only 83 but that 98% humidity..........ew.

    06/30/2025 20:21

  • Visitor

    Great story so far. Looking forward to reading more of it.

    06/30/2025 17:38

  • MonstersCallMeMama

    literally so good. 10 out of 10 recommend to a friend. you’ll laugh, you’ll cry and you’ll laugh more whilst enjoy lots of spice 🌶️ 🌶️ ✨

    06/30/2025 13:15

  • Visitor

    I think that Ayla is his mate. Poor thing had been thru hell

    06/30/2025 11:41

  • Veronica White

    I am considering the start of the new character POV book 3, in the Omega Bound Series and I am considering Lia's Redemption is officially starting book 2 today. They will all be in the same book. It's just easier for everyone reading.

    06/29/2025 18:50

  • Visitor

    nice one

    06/29/2025 18:08

  • Veronica White

    I have a family reunion this morning and then I will try and edit a few chapters before updating. I think I am edited only up to the first pack ceremony. so like 100 more chapters ago. #lessonlearned

    06/28/2025 12:44

  • Veronica White

    I'm considering Lia going to Kane's pack the end of book 1 and the start of book 2 in this series.

    06/28/2025 12:29

  • Visitor

    very good book!!

    06/28/2025 05:03

  • Veronica White

    I am working on my updates but it is taking longer due my wolf excursion today.

    06/28/2025 01:58

  • Veronica White

    took my littles to a traveling wolf pack at the fair. Pheonix had to be shown first....beautiful alpha...tri colored........lone wolf because the alpha female of the wolf pack won't accept him and I don't know why because he was waaaay cuter than the other wolfs she had in her pack and way more personable. Gave me another book idea...hahahahha

    06/27/2025 23:40

  • Visitor

    very good book. can’t wait to find out what happens next

    06/27/2025 14:02

  • Visitor

    it was super captivating, the emotions are tangible. it captures you and get you hooked

    06/27/2025 06:58

  • Veronica White

    FYI I researched female stalker characteristics before the last chapter and the line: “I will use your kidney for sushi and your finger bones as chopsticks.” was written from one woman to a man she had one date with. like 150,000 texts after one date....so della could have been worse......but she still's carazay.

    06/26/2025 20:42

  • Veronica White

    Dear: @lynn asian baby girl. The moderator of the three reddit forums, The person lying on the internet and saying that my story is finished, the person that is posting links to another website to my story with a changed title, The person profiting off my book, and the person who blocked me because I called you out..... I found you and turned you into the attorneys for copyright infringement.

    06/26/2025 12:59

  • Visitor

    good reading

    06/26/2025 07:50

  • Veronica White

    Sorry, i had planned to get my chapters done early but i found my story pirated all over the web on other platforms with a name change.

    06/25/2025 19:08

  • Visitor

    im going to try

    06/25/2025 15:14

  • Elizabeth Hill

    👍

    06/24/2025 22:36

  • Veronica White

    I'm researching y'all......hahahahha....#darcy in “The Female Stalker” studied 143 cases, gathered from law enforcement, prosecutorial, and entertainment corporate security files, using the definition of stalking behavior as “two or more unwanted contacts by a subject toward a target that created a reasonable fear in that target.” They describe the typical female stalker as a single woman in her mid-30s, either divorced or separated, who has a psychiatric diagnosis, most frequently a mood disorder. Unlike the stereotype of female stalkers perpetuated by the media, they point out that in fact, she is more likely to pursue a celebrity, stranger, or male acquaintance, rather than a prior sexual partner. They note, however, that the existence of a prior relationship with the victim, whether sexually intimate or as an acquaintance, significantly increased the frequency of violence and threats.

    06/24/2025 22:31

  • Visitor

    I absolutely am loving this book. the characters each have their own strengths and weaknesses and the plot is terrifyingly terrific

    06/24/2025 17:30

  • Visitor

    this book has held my interest so far

    06/23/2025 22:05

  • Visitor

    does thanr and alya have a hea

    06/23/2025 20:39

  • Veronica White

    My second story updated uploaded incorrectly. I apologize for the confusion and I'm waiting on the company editor to delete it.

    06/23/2025 05:54

  • Veronica White

    fun fact. I can write assholes in the comments, and it isn't flagged by the company for 'sensitive words' but I can't write s-t-u-p-i-d

    06/22/2025 23:32

  • Veronica White

    Some thoughts going through the comments: 1. Thane does admit he is s-t-u-p-i-d for not seeing the clues about his tie to Ayla. 2. Thane's sister is DEAD not cw tv dead, where everyone on the show can come back alive several times, but...dead dead. I am exploring something along these lines as a plot twist...may be this book or my second or none at all...not sure yet. 3.I may have started to seggsy time between Thane and Ayla too early in the book, but apparently, I was in my horndog feelings early since it wasn't planned. Actually, very little of this book has been. 4. I'm not a writer. I'm pretending to be. ITS MY FIRST TIME WRITING ANYTHING SINCE 2003 and that was a college essay. Please, give me a break. THIS IS MY FIRST BOOK. My second is up and probably has issues. If I find out my favorite book on these platforms wasn't finished by the author (it was abandoned a long time ago. werewolf heartsong I think) due to assholes, I would totally understand now.

    06/22/2025 23:31

  • Joan Osaretin Dottie

    This book has a suspenseful vibe to it and makes you want to keep reading. You just do not know what comes next.

    06/22/2025 21:23

  • Visitor

    This book is wonderful! Great details and amazing story. You can really see it happening as you read.

    06/22/2025 21:02
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