Trapped in a town she never chose, surrounded by people she had no choice but to be with, Layla learned early how to survive. 
For years, she watched and manipulated to make things the way they should have been before her grandparents got greedy. 
Now, at last, she eventually reached the point where none of it was on her anymore, and she got to start her life and try to find love. 
The past is no longer hers to carry.

This is the story of a girl broken by others’ choices—until she takes control, turns the tables, and sets out to claim a life, and even a love, that’s finally her own.

My New Life

Chapter 124

umm when did she get burned and mask on and can’t see right.  when did this happened? 🫩 Im confused 😵‍💫

i do appreciate you reading my book. i am fixing the book. i wrote it on a different program then my second book. it was supposed to help make it better. i am fixing this book as we speak. my second book has not been through that program. it will be fully fixed by the end of June.

Stephanie Mills

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is it just me or is the story all over the place.  wasn’t the mother dead from a fire?  so many betrayals and confusion going on 😫🤨

My editor is fixing as much as she can right now. i had to switch it to a new program to fix completely. i will have it done as soon as i can. this is my first book, my second was done on the program i am using to fix it

i think i love the story,but it is so poorly written. i'm nt english but this gives me headache. i won't continue, sorry

i plan on going back through and fixing what the grammer program messed up. I thought i caught all the mistakes. i guess i just caught the big ones.

Good book, great story idea, HORRIBLE editing! This book needs so much in the way of editing. I’m not even an English major and I’m getting a headache from trying to make sense of the grammatical and punctuation errors.

thank you for  your comment. i used an editing program when writing this book. i didnt realize i missed that much i will definitely go back and try to fix more of it soon. 