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in previous chapters Rosalina was proud of her “D” cups being bigger than her rival’s, but here it says she has “C” cups. I have always been very observant and I I can’t help but notice these inconsistencies. In college my professors used to have me go through new textbooks to check for errors before the full printings were done because they knew I would find the mistakes.
06/27/2025 02:55Visitor
Another mistake, here it says he was going to lock her in the cells for 2 weeks when previously he clearly stated several times that it would be 3 weeks.
06/26/2025 20:44Visitor
There is no such word as “flunged”! Again the flow of the story was interrupted by a nonexistent word.
06/26/2025 16:46Visitor
Again with the grammatical errors - “his fingers “drugged” into her”. There is no such word as drugged.
06/26/2025 14:32