Seducing Mr. Perfect Comments
LouValfa
it needs a big review.
09/05/2023 04:23Danielle Sidney
This story has some real potential, but it could really use a thorough go-over from an editor with some grammatical updates and plot definition. I understand that English is not everyone’s native tongue, but some assistance could really bring out the quality of writing.
09/05/2023 03:55
Ledia Cela
😜
09/05/2023 03:37
Kathleen
um, can I be honest? I like the storyline but I get lost at what’s happening. one time it’s jaden, then it’s karen. it’s confusing and hard to read. I almost thought jaden’s brother is calling him a karen. hahahahaha. anyway I’ll try to finish it.
09/05/2023 02:12