His Mafia Bride Comments

Rose Pe

The storyline is good, however, the writing is sub-par. A times inconsistent and immature.

Donna Pember

Dante-AS I have read the first few chapters and so far it looks like it might be a good storyline. Not my usual type of genre but I might give it a try after I finish the book I am reading.

Ashley Marie

DANTE-AS THIS STORY IS DIFFERENT NOT REALLY MY KINDS OF BOOK BUT IT HAD PLENTY OF SUSPENSE AND ROMANCE IM MORE OF THE WEREWOLF VAMPIRE TYPE BUT I WILL KEEP TRYING AND SEE WHERE THINGS GOES WHO KNOWS MAYBE I WILL LIKE SOMETHING NEW TO BE CONTINUED

Brenda Kay

Dante-AS what a great chapter the author … it has me very interested in their style of writing I hope the next chapter are just as interesting, this is a book that I won’t be able to stop reading.

Aly_sohn

Dante-AS I am having a hard time getting into this plot. the writing style is difficult for me, as it doesn't seem natural. I may try to give it a go again but didn't catch my attention too much.

Michibeba

#Dante-AS# The intro does get your attention and the dynamic between them seems interesting, it’s always fun to read a hate-love story as long as the initial hate is not excessive and requires the FL to ignore her self respect to have it work.

Mirela

Dante-AS I like the story. It's interesting. Poor girl, it's not enough that she is treated bad by her father, she ended up in a marriage with her family enemy which treateds her worst then a human being. Hope she can change him and melt his frozen heart.

Efrat Katz

Dante-AS so far I don't not think it is amazing, but then again I am not so big on entitlement. the writing is good, but there are grammatical errors, so proofreading might help

Ledia Cela

Dante -AS I LOVE MAFIA books … just reading the beginning of the book and look very interesting… I hope that Dante make her fall for him… can’t wait to unlock full book.. 🥰

Ashley

Dante-AS The introduction is very detailed and catches your attention. The storyline is interesting and makes you want to read to find out if they end up falling for each other. Just the interaction between the main characters in the introduction is enough to make you want to see more of them together. I have also looked through the authors other books and they look interesting as well.

Amal Samir

Dante-AS The intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next between the two of them. It seems interesting and fun to read the book. The first few chapters are good to read. I hope the rest chapters be good as well

KKH

Dante-AS This is so not what I expected. The author has me wondering why the father treats Alina so poorly and unlike the other 2 sisters. Also what is in this marriage for Dante if her father killed his parents?

stephanie carnahan

Dante-AS Mafia story with a strong female lead is a nice change. I consider Mafia men like alpha wolves so I get what I love about werewolf fantasy but based in a quasi reality. lol. Will read first chapters to confirm this to be added to my TBR.

Viking-Luna

Dante-AS Once again an entitled man thinks so highly of himself and expects from strangers the highest standards. Sure he didn't apologise either .

Christin Louth

Dante-AS so far it’s not really my style of story but I can see where it would be interesting for others who are into the mafia mob style of story. I will say I do like the Alina character. I hope they don’t tame her down at all.

Alyssa B.

Dante-AS This is not a genre I normally choose to read, and I thought I would give it a shot. Maybe it's OK if I continued to read on, but it didn't grab me right out of the gate.

Daisy Francisco

Dante-AS I love Mafia love stories,it’s so interesting and intriguing at the same and there’s more drama and action on this story.

Helen M

Dante-AS Reading the summary, I think I would like this book. The writing in the first chapter was quite descriptive but I did notice a few grammatical errors or maybe the author's first language isn't english so it translated without the nuances of the language. I'll add the book to my library and continue reading. Dante-AS

Sammy

Dante-AS I’ve read the first few chapters and unfortunately could not connect with the story or the author’s style of writing. It is quite a common storyline that has been overused by many authors in the mafia and dark romance genre. With the plot lacking originality, the author also fails to write fluently which ultimately made me lose interest to continue.

Traci Williams

Dante-AS I really struggled with the first chapter. Unfortunately the writing is poorly done. It looks like it may be a translation, and is somewhat redundant, and choppy. I didn’t read long enough to see if the plot line or premise would be interesting.

Hazel Honey

Dante-AS The beginning is very catchy and the tempo of events keeps you entertained. There is definitely a power struggle of dominance looming in the future for Dante and Alina, hopefully the end result in something beautiful.

Janaki Kollepalli

Dante-AS... I don't like mafia stories much so I am not that interested in this book... but the introduction is really good and if you like such genres then I am sure this book is for you... for me personally... not into mafia

Sammy

Dante-AS I’ve read the first few chapters and unfortunately could not connect with the story or the author’s style of writing. It is quite a common storyline that has been overused by many authors in the mafia and dark romance genre. With the plot lacking originality, the author also fails to write fluently which ultimately made me lose interest to continue.

Valkentina

Dante-AS, as every hate-love relationship I think they will start to care for each other. But her father and her sisters will make for a long time problems to them, also their attitude on Alina made me think they are not actually related.

Vicki usher

Dante-AS I do enjoy a good mafia story they never fail to please. I like the introduction it's very intriguing and interesting , looks as if it will be action packed with lots of drama, adventure and steamy scenes.

Awurabena Afriyie Asare

Dante-AS I like to read mafia books. It is one of the most interesting and incredible genre of books i love to read. I believe the lady and the guy would find a common ground to settle this love affair even though she doesn't want to be in the marriage.

miss foodieeee😋😋😋

Dante-As I ALREADY HAVE THIS ON MY LIBRARY cannot WAITTTTT to read this book after am done with my current one seriously love the Mafia books they just hit different 🙈🙈❣️❣️❣️

KMKC11

Dante-AS The writing/style of this story really lacks which is a bummer since it seems to have a solid storyline. I enjoy mafia stories and this one seems unique so I’m going to continue with it but it could definitely use an editor’s touch.

Rafael

Dante-AS. I really Iike the introduction. It seems a very interesting story. I don't usually read these gender of books. but I am intrigued and I will added in my library. and read it in the future.

Stephanie Urban

Dante-As ahhh yes the foreshadow... love it

Caitlin Sullivan

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Stephanie Urban

Dante-AS ohhhh that's where this is going....😏

yes sir

dante-as I had fun reading this book it's light and interesting introduction I will added it to my library to read more later

Bianca Bratu

Dante-AS This seems like just my type of story since I absolutely love mafia related stories. I have read a lot of similar stories but this one just has something different about it that keeps you intrigued.

Caitlin Sullivan

Dante-AS ... so I'm a bit torn on this one. I have enjoyed the mafia genre in the past, and there is potential to have a twist. I just hope that it's well written

AnnaBanana

Dante-AS The start of this story really had me hooked. I had this book in my library for a while, been looking forward to starting it. I can't wait to continue finding out what happens between Dante and Alina. Mafia books are my weakness and this one seems like it's going to really have me addicted

Kristen

Dante-AS seems like an interesting story. Enemies to lovers can be done really well or really poorly, depending on how far things go when they are Enemies. However, mafia books aren't really my cup of tea.

Paula Almeida

Dante-as. Dante is mesmerized by Alina but she doesn’t love him and was forced to marry him. I think Dante can make her fall in love with him but I also think she is going to wrap him around her finger.

Doobies

Dante-AS - I’m on the fence on this one. The intro didn’t really hook my interest and make me excited to read more. This seems to be another stereotypical mafia/mobster story of him taking revenge on the innocent daughter without any indication something that could make this story unique.

TinyReader

Dante-AS Typically not a fan of mafia type books because of the ruthlessness of the males leads towards the female leads but when the leads evade certain types of dramas to find love however tragic, I accept the happy endings as they come.

Ann Hollenbeck

the beginning is good she sounds like a spitfire and she will give him a hard time can't wait to read more love this 💕

AngelaCCoelho

Dante-As I'm very suspicious. But I love a badass guy romance... especially Mafia books. They are my favourites. This one I will definitely read. can’t wait to read. ❤️

icuovrthere

Dante-AS I'm not one to read mafia stories, but this is an exception. I feel it has a deep storyline and great character development. I love reading about strong female leads and when they go against the patriarchy.

Syl Xiao Lin

Dante-AS This story is complete which is a good sign. I usually enjoy a good mafia book with a brutal powerful don for a małe lead completely obsessed with his little lady. But, for obvious reasons, I have been lately avoiding stories with Russian main leads. I find it difficult to sympathise with them.

exty

Dante-AS I have read a lot of mafia book so I guess this one will be the same.first of all I like this book because it's complete and has both strong male and female character.so let me continue reading

Kirsten Tooker

Dante-AS Not my usual read but I do enjoy a good Mafia story every once in a while. The introduction is interesting but I’m having issues getting invested in the story. I’m still going to add it to my library so I can read the first couple chapters another day when I don’t have a headache to see if I want to keep in my library.

yancy

Dante-AS started off very interesting. the book needs some editing in some parts. I am adding it to my library. Who bothers for an apology in a club anyway? 🤣🤣 Let's see now when he goes to her father's house.

a j

Dante-AS I like how this book started and can’t wait to keep reading. the author is emphasizing how serious he is but I think we will see he has a softer side. I like that she is a strong character

jules kc

Dante-AS I really like the style and I like Alina. she seems like a fierce young woman who can stand up for herself. her father and her sisters seem horrible and Dante as well, at least at first glance. I do think there's more to him, so I'm interested in learning more about him. I'm sure I'll read on

Dante-AS I love a good mafia story and from the description this sounds interesting. From reading the beginning I like how the author's writing is so descriptive, loving Alina, can't wait to read more.

Dante-AS I like this story! Yes an exclamation after that sentence. I actually do not read Mafia stories. I hate illegal activities being spotlighted. But I love how strong, smart and resilient the female lead is. Please this story deserves to be portrayed in the best light and need to be proof read.

ANTONELLA CASSAR

Dante-AS this would have been a great book to read. but the English it is not good. the author seems to be not native to English as it is not written good. sorry not reading. there are other books

Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

Dante-AS Unfortunately, this story is not my cup of tea. Generally, I am not very fond of Mafia stories. This story does not capture nor is able to hold my interest at all.

aduke woolford

Dante-AS I enjoy stories where the female lead is not totally submissive since it makes the interactions more spicy. I enjoy when both parties have to work as a team whether they want to or not, I hope that this doesn't disappoint.

Karooke

Dante-AS Mafia Geschichten sind nicht so mein Ding, von daher kann ich nicht viel sagen - das Intro ist interessant und wer auf diese Art von Geschichten steht, wird dieses Buch bestimmt gerne lesen..

Aisha Ali

Dante-AS I haven't read mafia books in a long time and I already have this in my library so I will read it soon as I love strong independent woman in books along with hot and possessive men

Caitlin Sullivan

Dante-AS ... so I'm a bit torn on this one. I have enjoyed other mafia stories in the past, and this one seems to have potential for a new twist. I hope it's well written

Tricia Freligh

Dante-AS This story sounds like it could be really good so I added it to my library. Sounds like she is going to keep him in his toes and he might end up on his knees. lol.

Lacey Vaughn

Dante-AS im a sucker for a mafia book. Definitely will be adding this to my library to read next. it has a great storyline and great character development.also love how strong the female lead is.

SpudFoxy22

Dante-AS just reading the first paragraph has got me hooked may have to take this one on while I wait for my other book to finish

JustBee

Dante-AS I think it would make more sense or be more authentic if Alina spoke to her father in her Native language being Russian. I understand that this book is written in English but a bit of research on what is father in Russian would have made this more interesting. People speak in their native languages at home and for the family to not even utter one Russian word is simply unrealistic and quite ignorant of the writer to not incorporate in this book. But I like the pace of the book so far.

Fernanda Neto

Dante-AS Os primeiros capítulos deixaram-me curiosa. O resumo fala de uma protagonista forte. Sendo Alina a mais nova das três irmãs e constantemente deterida por elas e pelo pai, quero saber como o seu carácter se vai desenvolver. Será que Nicolai é seu pai? Terá sido mesmo ele o responsável pela morte dos pais de Dante e da mãe de Alina...

Dante-AS. The intro sounds interesting and I have read and enjoyed mafia styled books in the past. I will give this book a try and hopefully continue reading it. Hopefully Dante does not do anything to drastic to Alina.

Mechelle Gould

Dante-AS looks like a good story line gets your attention but it’s not my normal reading so I’m not going to continue past the few chapters I’ve read I’m not into mafia books so I could be completely wrong about my review.

Cyndi Long

Dante-AS I think Dante and Alina are attracted to each other from the start but they are both covering it up with their hatred. so far this story is intriguing and I expect it’s only going to get better.

Sharon Milton

Dante-AS as I started to read found that I could not get into as did not feel the characters and it really did not intrude me at all as I got lost in the story and

deb

we need an ending!!! Please!!! Also Alina needs to make Dante beg a little

Adaririchichi

Hello everyone this book is completed my editor is just yet to mark it as such

deb

is this book complete before I start reading?

Adaririchichi

Hello guys sorry I uploaded chapter 56 twice just read the first uploaded chapter I'll make sure the second is deleted

Naomi Millican

when are we getting the next update please, the suspension is killing me lol 😵😫