Rejected My Alpha Mate Comments
Karen Tolley
ok she does have a choice. talk to Tyler don't listen to Patrick he doesn't care at all and he is not helping at all he is just making things worse. swallow your pride and ask the right person for help not Patrick.
06/05/2024 01:32
Reader-119753
good book shame chapters are so short 🤷♂️
09/05/2023 06:16Ashley
JUNE I am interested in many of this authors books, they all look like they would be amazing. The introduction gives you a look into the female leads experience with finding her mate and sleeping with him but for some reason she wants to leave. I wonder why she wants to run from her mate.
09/05/2023 05:50icuovrthere
JUNE it's hard to know if I want to invest in this book when the author has included an excerpt, instead of a synopsis. I know sometimes it can be recommended to the writer by an editor, etc, but where's the intrigue? where's the other point of view?
09/05/2023 05:48Bianca Bratu
JUNE I really love this story and I think it has great potential. I absolutely love the female lead in this story is a strong woman and doesn’t settle for anything less than she deserves.
09/05/2023 05:43
Lori Holden
June. the into wasn't really an intro, still don't know what the book is about. why would she call her dad? why would she reject her mate after her wold told her he was her mate?
09/05/2023 05:34Ashley P
JUNE this book is already in my library and for very good reason. this author is amazing. I've read some of her other works and they have all been equally as good. I don't think you can go wrong here.
09/05/2023 05:30AngelaCCoelho
JUNE - Jeez, what a start to the story. What do you mean, they're already in bed right away. Wow, what happened to them?! How interesting, I can't wait to read this story. This author already made me more than curious. I've already put it on the list for future readings.
09/05/2023 05:12Kirsten Tooker
JUNE The introduction wasn’t really a introduction since it didn’t have a blurb about what the story is actually about. After reading the first couple chapters I was left confused over what was happening. I won’t be adding it to my library.
09/05/2023 05:11Karin Tuchman
JUNE , This book is abit in a mess for my taste. I just don't see the direct storyline it's all over the place and this type of books trigger my ADHD which means I will have to pass this book unfortunately.
09/05/2023 05:11KMKC11
JUNE - This book is, in a word, a disaster. I have no idea what the plot is and the writing style is just not my cup of tea. The lead character seems to be all over the map making it difficult to follow. Maybe with a little TLC this book could be better but as of now it’s a pass.
09/05/2023 05:08JUNE. I absolutely love this author’s books. I have had this book in my library for awhile and unfortunately have not had a chance to read it yet. But I am looking forward to the day that I am able to read it.
09/05/2023 04:57Alice Pinto
JUNE Once more, I have always loved werewolf stories! the introduction of this one is well written and it intrigued me to read the book. I will add this story to my list
09/05/2023 04:57Donna Pember
June I have read the first few chapters and I am a bit confused about where the story is going. I don't understand why she would call her father for help after what he did to her. I am not sure if I am going to finish the book
09/05/2023 04:52JustBee
“JUNE” I do not understand the second chapter it just didn’t address what happened after “please help me” well they slept together but I still don’t get how they got there. The chick seems to all over the place and I don’t think this book is doing much to hold my interest, the first 3 chapters do not excite they are just word on paper(screen) I am not feeling the emotions or elements in the lack of setting. Like how did she even get in the hotel room almost getting raped.
09/05/2023 04:49
LouValfa
June. For the first time I didn’t read the intro. but I can say that this story is promising. I nearly stopped at the first chapter because I really don’t like rapes or any kind of violence against children or woman or of bullied.
09/05/2023 04:46
Joele G
JUNE This book has also capture my attention to the storyline; it has gotten me intrigue in it; it does seems to be a very good book and well written; I wanna just continue reading to find out what happens next.
09/05/2023 04:45Kobie Stroebel
JUNE good start
09/05/2023 04:45
Sammy
JUNE I read a few chapters and somehow could not connect with the writing style. I think the flow of the storyline was compromised and became choppy because the author unsuccessfully tried to add some suspense or a cliffhanger at the end of the chapters. Also, personally I prefer quick reads and 160 chapters is too lengthy for me and I become bored easily with drawn out stories.
09/05/2023 04:45Leré Saunderson
JUNE I do not understand why she rejected him even after Raine, her wolf, told her that he is in fact their mate. From other books in the werewolf genre, its clear that there is a huge trust relationship between the human and wolf in the partnership. Why is she not trusting her wolf? Odd.
09/05/2023 04:39Vicki usher
JUNE This book looks so good I love this type of book. It got a different storyline that's interesting an I am intrigued to see what happens. I think it will have great character growth and I for one am looking forward to reading it.
09/05/2023 04:33Autumn Bradley
June I have want to know are all three men she connected somehow? and is the second man in the room with the cleaning lady the same as the one she slept with?
09/05/2023 04:33Doobies
JUNE - I agree with several other reviewers that only using an excerpt from the story as the intro and not including any kind of synopsis/summary makes it difficult for the reader/audience to determine what this book is about and if one is interested enough in it to invest in reading further.
09/05/2023 04:32JUNE First I think there should be a warning that the beginning of this story starts with an attempted assault as it might be triggering for some. Having said that I think it's going to be a really interesting story so will read more.
09/05/2023 04:30
Amal Samir
JUNE, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next between the two of them. It seems interesting to read the book to know how they met and how they will deal with each other
09/05/2023 04:04Me Myself
JUNE I read the introduction and the first few chapters of this book and I am so confused. the three year time jump was probably a mistake because the actions of the female lead make no sense.
09/05/2023 04:03Awurabena Afriyie Asare
JUNE I just love how the lady sacrificed her modesty to protect that of the man It shows that women can be very kind in dire situations like this. The introduction of the book kind of suggests that the guy may be human that was why he couldn't sense the mate bond. But since the lady was able to sense it , it is left with her for him to realize the bond that exists between them so that it may work aa the goddess herself proclaimed.
09/05/2023 03:59Helen M
JUNE The introduction is simply a scene from the story and doesn’t really provide much information about the storyline. The slight twist to the typical “rejected mate” plot is that it is the female doing the rejecting and not the male. I’ll add to my list of possible stories to read. JUNE
09/05/2023 03:50Caitlin Sullivan
June .. I can see the potential in this book as it starts out with a bang. However, I don't understand why she called her dad for advice and no one thought to go to either alpha, mate or original packs, for advice or help. why lie?
09/05/2023 03:43yes sir
june I almost finished reading this book but I think I read it on another website it's good I will read from where I left of to know what will happen in the end
09/05/2023 03:37Paula Almeida
June- okay I am really interested in this book. I really like to read warewolf books. I really want to know whether she stays with her mate or not. this book definitely has my attention.
09/05/2023 03:34Brenda Kay
JUNE what a great chapter the author … it has me very interested in their style of writing I hope the next chapter are just as interesting, this is a book that I won’t be able to stop reading.
09/05/2023 03:33Hazel Honey
JUNE This has the potential to keep my interest throughout the story, the intro serves its purpose well, so if the introduction arises your interest, I would think the story is likely to keep you entertained.
09/05/2023 03:31Hazel Honey
JUNE The intro intrigued me enough to read the first few chapters and I must say I'm getting hooked into this story. An interesting storyline with diverse characters and a good flow to make an easy read.
09/05/2023 03:27Zana
June the intro doesn't really appeal to me because it's a storyline that I've already read several times, so I don't know if I want to start it again
09/05/2023 03:14
Tricia Freligh
“JUNE” This intro sounds so interesting. I just added it to my library. I wonder what will happen when he wakes up. I haven’t started it yet but I’m curious to see.
09/05/2023 03:06April Hamlett
d5s8 This story is really interesting. Very active from the start. Her dad is a bastard. She should never have been responsible for her brother.
09/05/2023 00:13Gemma Butler
d5s8 After reading the first few chapters I can already tell that I’m going to love this book
09/05/2023 00:12
Alexis
d5s8 Interesting introduction! Will definitely be adding to my library and reading later on! Thanks for the new read!
09/05/2023 00:12d5s8 the intro got me. I’m intrigued to know why she’s going to leave her mate.
09/05/2023 00:05Reader-350476
d5s8 I started reading this book with the introduction and this one is really a good book to read and I’m excited to read more chapters
09/04/2023 23:59Jade Ridler
#d5s8# a strong start to the book with great characters. it's interesting to see a female reject the male for a change. excited to read the rest
09/04/2023 23:58Julie Mejia Zertuche
d5s8 enjoying this book so far, and like how the female lead isn't feeling hopeless and is strong in this story.
09/04/2023 23:54Maria Mazzy
d5s8. really love the start of the book love the fact she puts her dad in his place and shes a strong assertive character you go girl!
09/04/2023 23:48zira
d5s8 the excitement to read this book is beyond me...i havent finished the other book im having but i start reading this already, that how catchy and good the introduction of this book...now i cant stop reading it
09/04/2023 23:45Sumriti Singh
d5s8 great introduction good start and a complete book WT else one can ask for so definitely gonna read it to the end
09/04/2023 23:38Reader-529162
#d5s8# Interesting content and the flow of the book is good. Looking forward to the rest of the book!
09/04/2023 23:37Rafael
#d5s8# I like the introduction. it seems a interesting story. because I like the supernatural stories I am going to added it in my library and reading soon.
09/04/2023 23:29Vicki usher
d5s8# after reading the introduction this book seem interesting. Have to now what happens when he wakes up will he mad or just want to find her ?
09/04/2023 23:27Stacey Stratton
d5s8 from just the intro, this sounds like a great story! definitely adding this to my library!
09/04/2023 23:23
Megan Phillips
d5s8 just started this book, it's really interesting I hope the female lead rejects her mate for a change of pace.
09/04/2023 23:20Bianca Bratu
d5s8 I can’t wait to keep reading this story because it had a strong start that keeps you hooked since the begining
09/04/2023 23:11
Michibeba
#d5s8# can’t wait to read something different in which the female is actually the one “rejecting”, it’s a first for me in shifter novels where the female is not the antagonist but the lead doing this
09/04/2023 23:08Terrin Garis
#d5s8# I like how this book seems different from other wolf books. The story line seems promising
09/04/2023 23:04d5s8 #d5s8 this is new where werewolves are embarrassed by being naked and be near a naked man. good introduction and I want to find out why she's trying to run away from his mate
09/04/2023 22:55Rhonda Gibson
I wouldn't meet him at the house. I'm afraid he could take her captive. He could take her baby even. This may all be a ruse by him.
09/04/2023 21:22Sandra Kazlaskas
why doesn’t she call his father to help out or send his dad copies of the texts she’s sent ?
09/04/2023 21:02Rhonda Gibson
Selflessness? Maybe Nathan has alternative motives. What about his fated mate?
09/04/2023 20:14Sandra Kazlaskas
still think his daddy would force him to complete the rejection, if not take him to court then only accept what he’s claiming he owes him then return the amount in court with receipt
09/04/2023 19:28Rhonda Gibson
I sure hope they solve the mystery of her mother. Why haven't they done a DNA test with Richard Campbell? There is so much mystery in this story. I wonder if Tyler's mother was really his father's fated mate since they do so much wheeling and dealing where mates and children are concerned.
09/04/2023 19:21Georgina Bush
what happened to lindy and her mate. ?
09/04/2023 19:10Debra A Jackson
I love it! just wish I knew what happened with Nathan and Lindy
09/04/2023 18:05Kirsti D
Please Please change the cover, it does not do the book justice. I have searched for a few that I think would work better if you're interested.
09/04/2023 17:05I am really enjoying this book. Note to the author though: The front cover of this book is horrible! I have considered maybe starting to read it several times over the last few months but the cover picture is really off-putting. The only reason I eventually decided to load it to my library and give it a chance was because of the many positive reviews of the book.
09/04/2023 16:40gramma
thisbook is so good. do you know how many more chapters there will be?
09/04/2023 16:28Michelle Reed
wow what a story!!! I hope there's going to be a follow up book 😁
09/04/2023 16:20Siobhain Shaw-Walker
Surprised there aren't more comments on here!! So in hopes that potential new readers might read this when deciding whether or not to give this book a go, I'm happy to write a little something after literally just completing the book (with none of the annoying big spoilers that so often litter comments sections) All in all, a great story and one that I would have been happy to continue reading. I only realised how long the actual book was just now upon reflection. The book is long, yes...but it's because it's already kind of like two books in one. Rachel and Tyler's relationship is kind of split into a before and after type thing. Lots of twists and turns and revelations that keep the story moving forward and the characters growing. It has really set itself up a glorious foundation for future sequels! So many potential stories to explore and I can't wait for the author to hopefully begin work on further books in this series *fingers crossed* ..ASAP hahaha! No pressure 😂 ❤️ it! xx
09/04/2023 16:05gramma
this book is so good, but Tyler doesn't deserve a 2nd chance.
09/04/2023 15:22Christina Johnson
Hi, hope you will update soon. love your writing. x
09/04/2023 15:19Carol Taylor
great read can't put down
09/04/2023 15:01Claudia Almendra
hey there author...any idea how long this book will actually be???? I don't want it to turn into one of these never ending ones.
09/04/2023 14:47Linda G
sounds like a toxic relationship where no one communicated. at least Tyler heard why she rejected him and he sorta dealt with jenny.
09/04/2023 13:47Linda G
if her father is there causing a scene, can't they all see he is a major issue for her? does Tyler know about Ethan?
09/04/2023 13:44Amber-lee Stewart
why do I like nathen and actually want Rachel to be with him 🤔🤔
09/04/2023 13:18Parwan Kaur
hello dear author..can u please tell me how often do u update this book....excellent writing tho can't wait to read other books too
09/04/2023 12:27Carolyn Narbone
well I was not expecting that at all.
09/04/2023 12:23
Sintia Samuel
It won’t let me read chapter 21 😭😩 why’ve
09/04/2023 11:52Esmeralda Lopez
do you have other stories we.can read in between this one.
09/04/2023 11:51Tara Liszewski
I need more!!
09/04/2023 11:32Esmeralda Lopez
Hi, when will the next couple of chapters come available?
09/04/2023 10:58
Bonib2
How often do you post update fir this story?
09/04/2023 10:28
Caroline Above Story
thanks for liking my story! I will update it from the next Monday! stay tuned!
09/04/2023 10:25Caroline Above Story
My all lovelies, thanks for giving my story a shot! If you wanna keep updated on my writing schedule and the next stories, pls join my f b group “Caroline Above Story”. I’m tying my best to build the community up. will be honored to have your support. lots of love, Caro
09/04/2023 10:13
Akinkunmi Victoria
your story is interesting! Please next update
09/04/2023 09:49Samantha Rickards
loved the story already can't wait for updated chapters
09/04/2023 09:44
