The Vampire Kings Slave Mate Comments
Visitor
I am seriously addicted to this book! Amazing story line so far!
08/27/2025 13:56Visitor
i really love the story so interesting and captivating to read
06/04/2025 16:26Visitor
love the story!!
06/03/2025 01:54Visitor
I really like this book so far I hope it will be good through out this book
06/02/2025 23:25Visitor
I can't seem to be able to get past this step and back to the story 😭
05/03/2025 20:50Visitor
I love this story..I can't get anything else done today...I guess I'm addicted 😉
05/03/2025 20:46tamara graf
Love the way this story is developing, great writing.
01/19/2024 13:01Visitor
Great start! Can't wait to read more. 👏
01/17/2024 14:47Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
#Thanksgiving! This is a truly delightful story. Once started, it is very difficult to put down.
11/26/2023 13:21Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
#HolloweenVibe! Great story !
10/31/2023 13:10janna dykierek
nice and interesting Story so farbut please just decide if its neveah or nevaeh
09/05/2023 02:56
Jopas
4f5d I've never fell in love with a Vampire story until I read this one. It's amazing and hot. Great job the Author did put out here.
09/05/2023 00:33Madelein Schoeman
4f5d - another amazing book! love the 2 main characters but also live the fact that the author incorporates the second in command and his love slave as well as the Dragon Twins. You also don't expect the book to end the way it does!! Go Queen👑. The author also teases you with spin off stories mermaids and fairy kings.
09/05/2023 00:13middi
4f5d - interesting that there is a slight twist on the usual vampire narrative. never seen a vampire that potentially has a mate, it's usually the werewolves. curious to see how it unfolds
09/05/2023 00:03Jody Nichols
this is a good book I can’t wait to find out if marry is a vampire or maybe something els besides human can wait to find out.
09/04/2023 23:51Hayley louise
4f5d I find this story not the usual same old. draws you in. I'm excited for what happens next now the vampire King has bought her as a blood slave.
09/04/2023 23:37Gemma Butler
4f5d Very interesting book introduction. I’ve added to my library and can’t wait to start reading
09/04/2023 23:35Chika Brooke
4f5d This book is not your usual vampire book,It encompasses other exotic beings like fairys,dragons,werewolf etc.The story line is superb with so many twists that keeps you on the edge of your seat.I loved reading it and stopped till the end. Its a must read
09/04/2023 23:30Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
4f5d This is a fantastic story ! I could not put it down after starting to read it.
09/04/2023 23:29Barb Austin
4f5d Started reading an so far very descriptive and it caught my attention send exciting and different
09/04/2023 23:28zira
4f6d omg...my heart's squeeze in anticipation...this book will be the death of me in a good way...😂😂😂...these is the second vampire book i had and i want more of it
09/04/2023 23:22Awurabena Afriyie Asare
#4f5d# The fact that the King was able to protect the girl is very admirable. Wish every human is protected and treated with love and care.
09/04/2023 23:19
4f5d #4f5d I read the first few chapters and I must say it is good! I'm not usually into Vampire stories so I'm keen on this story
09/04/2023 22:56L. Roy
this is a great story so far can't wait 🙌 to read the remainder of this book 👏 🙌 👍 😄 😊
09/04/2023 21:36Aneesahs
he describes himself like a werewolf more than a vampire
09/04/2023 20:17Aneesahs
I don't like when chapters repeat themselves but just from a different point of view. it a waste of a chapter.
09/04/2023 20:14✅ Finished Sunday 3:48pm 22.11.27
09/04/2023 18:20Christina Ahlbrandt
ending was too rushed, author should have taken the time to really show the happiness of Mary and cast. a little bit disappointed
09/04/2023 18:00I love their friendship. The girls look beautyful but I'm cringing a little about putting together a silver-green dress and red-gold jewelry ...
09/04/2023 16:37Janet Bennett
only read the 1st chapter hooked already
09/04/2023 16:11Ada Gold
your book is amazing. I just wanted to ask the book with Marques, Neveah and Kade is it out and what's the name and ofcourse the one with Ambrose. beautiful book
09/04/2023 16:10LoveWins
This was a very good book! I can’t wait for the coming sequels.
09/04/2023 16:09
Dinchuks
@Marriah Catherine Perry, I have started to read one of your books - The Vampire kings slave mate. It is very exited and great story, but there is one nuance to be corrected. As a person who speaks and reads in RU (its not my native language, but Im good at it) I have to write this to you: in RU the roots of the words for female and masculine genger are basically the same, but the endings of the words are different for each gendre, namely, there are different inflections of nouns and verbs for each of gendre. Google usually translate words and sentences in masculine gendre, so in the story, when Nikolai adresses Mary, the correct version would be for example "моя дорогая". As it is written down as it is now, it is like he adresses a male and not a female. I hope this knowledge will help you to improve your story. I will continue to read it with interest ♡
09/04/2023 16:06Beckie Treble
Just finished your book after starting it on Tuesday. (it's now Thursday 1:22am) I thoroughly enjoyed this book but was hoping we'd have some more chapters after the Battle instead of the last. I will re-read it soon. Thank you ♡
09/04/2023 16:05Janet Bennett
I am hooked
09/04/2023 15:54Kathy Kinsley
quiet knock instead of quite quiet - not loud quite- to a full extent. That was quite an experience.
09/04/2023 14:49Reader-954199
“glimmer of hope…”
09/04/2023 14:47Kathy Kinsley
capture should be captor
09/04/2023 14:32Amber-lee Stewart
has this book been abandoned?
09/04/2023 14:32
Analiza
wga5 will happen now?
09/04/2023 14:25courtney braden
is this the same Nikolai as in the unexpected Luna book?
09/04/2023 13:40Just an update… I am working on the final chapters now for this book. There are about ten chapters left give or take and I will be positing them all at once. Thanks for staying with me along this bumpy ride. The second book I will be writing will be about Marques- The merman, but that is a tale for another time ;)
09/04/2023 13:24Ruby Moore
l am happy about the contract. l really enjoy the book 🤗
09/04/2023 13:03It’s moving week. We will be hitting the road today, giving me plenty of time to write. I will be uploading all new chapters this weekend
09/04/2023 12:45Analiza
i hate it. mary is an idiot for trusting.... she is a human but do nit know Her kind?
09/04/2023 12:37
Bella Jersey 2
I hope Mary put a stop to certain practices
09/04/2023 12:32Bella Jersey 2
Elizabeth is already in trouble
09/04/2023 12:13Bella Jersey 2
can he also buy bethanie. please
09/04/2023 12:11caimhe dineen
read through them all in 3 hours, can’t put it down! any new chapters?
09/04/2023 12:10Bella Jersey 2
yep selfish
09/04/2023 12:09Siobhain Shaw-Walker
Started this book today and absolutely devoured it. I love it! So well written, with very few mistakes. I love the story and I can't wait to read more!!!
09/04/2023 12:07Bella Jersey 2
I hate how evil one race can become. then decided they can make humans slaves and sell them
09/04/2023 12:06Bella Jersey 2
I see a nice loophole we’ll tell him when we save our guys. we will not make our guys meet him
09/04/2023 12:00Bella Jersey 2
Mom’s revenge or justice was something out of game of thrones
09/04/2023 11:58Bella Jersey 2
already keeping secrets no matter how small always comes to bite you in the ass
09/04/2023 11:55Bella Jersey 2
I like how she’s trying to survive this situation
09/04/2023 11:52Bella Jersey 2
just to state for the record when asshole gets his ass handed to him. I’m throwing a party
09/04/2023 11:51Analiza
what wull happen to mary?
09/04/2023 11:44Michaela Alaniz
how often are the updates for this book?
09/04/2023 11:43Bella Jersey 2
I hope vampires don’t have OCD.
09/04/2023 11:36Analiza
wow.... i am hoping the updates will be soon....
09/04/2023 11:28Bella Jersey 2
I think dad is gonna make me throw up
09/04/2023 11:26Taylor Burnside
I am hoping for a new chapter soon but I also hope the author is well! Your chapters help me so much to destress between college tests and work! You are awesome!
09/04/2023 11:26***WRITING UPDATE*** I have been super busy with some exams for school, now that that is over I’ll be writing at least 4 new chapters this week. I’m hoping to have all 4 chapters posted by Friday at the latest,
09/04/2023 11:20Bella Jersey 2
the same line the beta used when they killed Mary’s sister
09/04/2023 11:17Analiza
bastard Ash. i am hoping the coronation will go on....
09/04/2023 11:16Analiza
yeah i also hate the wolves.... i am hooing the coronation went well....
09/04/2023 11:09
Chicken N A Biscuit
I’m hating the wolves in this book! I always love reading werewolf books, well not this one.lol. I am LOVING the book so far!
09/04/2023 10:53Joann Brock
I have to say at firstA I wondered if this story would be any good but I have to say I love reading it so far hope it stays like this
09/04/2023 10:50Analiza
the sooner the update please....
09/04/2023 10:37
Sarah Clift
when's the next update I'm really enjoying this book
09/04/2023 10:32
Lux Foxy
how often are the updates?
09/04/2023 10:31Lareina Abercrumbie
this is GOOOOOOD
09/04/2023 10:31Chicken N A Biscuit
anyone know how often this is updated? thanks
09/04/2023 10:22Analiza
Happy New Year... God Mary is an idiot...
09/04/2023 10:11Analiza
Merry Christmas to u too Marriah... excellent chapter.... godbless
09/04/2023 10:10Emmalene Delta
is the younger sisters name Anya, Vanya or Avaya? I'm getting confused in the first chapter
09/04/2023 10:10
Plasma
"Nikolai's blood had caused her to orgasm" I haven't even started to read this omg that notification was savage
09/04/2023 10:09Analiza
omg i really like this... i am hoping the updates will ne soon..
09/04/2023 10:08Analiza
i like it. hope the update is soon
09/04/2023 10:05Tamara Hicks
lol they are funny
09/04/2023 09:57Analiza
the chapter is short
09/04/2023 09:49Analiza
i am hoping they will meet
09/04/2023 09:48wanted to let you all know that I am working on the next update today. the kids and I have a stomach bug so it’s delayed my writing schedule.
09/04/2023 09:45Analiza
wow.... i cant wait the next chapter.....
09/04/2023 09:45Firdaus Issah
I really love this story and can't wait for the next update but the chapters are too short
09/04/2023 09:45chapters 11 repeat on chapters 13, and there’s no chapter 12.
09/04/2023 09:44Thank you for writing such a great story, I check for updates daily... Looking forward to how the story develops 😊❤️
09/04/2023 09:41Analiza
are they mates? i really like this story
09/04/2023 09:38Analiza
some more updatr please im dying to read😂😂😂
09/04/2023 09:37I am loving this story, please continue
09/04/2023 09:34Analiza
i just finished reading this chapter and im excuted....
09/04/2023 09:33Analiza
wow amazing story....
09/04/2023 09:31Analiza
yeah the chapters are short
09/04/2023 09:27Angel Pugh
when does the next chapter come out so ready for it
09/04/2023 09:26update please ? 🥺
09/04/2023 09:14Ginia Johnson
Her sister’s name keeps getting changed from Anya to Vanya and now it says Avaya. Just wanted to let you know.
09/04/2023 09:08Analiza
chapter 3 only?
09/04/2023 09:02
