Untouchable (The Moonlight Avatar Series Collection) Comments
Robin Austin Haas
really good story
09/04/2023 09:39
Book is good, I know I read one soooo similar to this one, but this story is really good.
09/04/2023 09:38Robin Austin Haas
I'm loving ❤ the quotes before each chapter! bravo to the author
09/04/2023 09:36
Shebee1614
I’m loving this book and I’m hoping she and the Beta become mates, although she aske the Goddess to not give her another. She deserves that type of love with another
09/04/2023 09:36love this story tho wish I could follow
09/04/2023 09:34Reader-357800
please please let them both fight together and not let Jonathan mess with Neron
09/04/2023 09:33Cynthia Nicole Duvall
love love love!!!! can’t wait for an update when you are rested!!!
09/04/2023 09:333 guesses that Odessa is Darien's mate
09/04/2023 09:32At least there are people who care about her but can't do much about her current situation
09/04/2023 09:30Ta1sha
neron
09/04/2023 09:29Shebee1614
So much for that wish
09/04/2023 09:28Well that was a steamy chapter!!!😮😮
09/04/2023 09:28Sharda Sietaram
This is a good book, so far!
09/04/2023 09:27Ta1sha
heron definitely earned forgivenesses
09/04/2023 09:26
Fale
Oh goddess the female lead gets more and more fascinating. Girl you’re so lucky I’m not Nuria 🤣 Uff and I also need a hand fan every time I see Neron’s name too lol 😩
09/04/2023 09:26Ta1sha
wow so much has happened and now her life couldn’t be anymore easy. going to keep reading hoping for her to find happiness. fingers crossed. I wonder if the bad guy is related to neron
09/04/2023 09:19
IzzyB302
You are a wonderful author. I can’t wait to see what the future has in store for you! This series is phenomenal. ❤️
09/04/2023 09:18Fale
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 again… Onyx hahaha love it!
09/04/2023 09:18
Kristi Baker
my heart breaks every time I read how she was abused.......
09/04/2023 09:16Lena James
the "Never get poisoned." line.. Good advice! really broke up the tension, I wasnt expecting it. Laughed so hard for no reason 🤣
09/04/2023 09:10Pklj Ghj
nub tycoon game but I have a lot
09/04/2023 09:07Ta1sha
I’m so nervous for kiya and how things will go when Nero sees her
09/04/2023 09:07Ta1sha
I love halimas attitude towards getting better. I hope this is good coming her way finally
09/04/2023 09:06Reader-983354
I have forgiven Neron he has changed and I want them together. He is doing his best to show that he’s changed and he is a better person and he loves her. There will be no one else for Kiya the mood goddess herself handpicked him for her. I hope they get together real soon. Kiya needs some real loving to erase the past from her mind.
09/04/2023 09:06oh my goddess!!!! It’s about that time for Kiya and Neron to solidify their bond!!!! I wonder if Aloha Johnathan will be brought back as their undoing by Apophis? just a thought
09/04/2023 09:05
Rose
hmmm I am a bit suspicious of Allha Johnathan. something tells me that at least 1 of those “omegas” is actually his daughter. but he doesn’t have high views of women and see them as weak. and he probably punishes Liberty for not bearing a male.
09/04/2023 09:05Ta1sha
wait no warning on the name change or did I miss something halima= kiya now
09/04/2023 09:05Ta1sha
wow I’m glad Nero is sorry and others to but I still don’t think he has earned her respect or forgiveness. can’t wait to read on
09/04/2023 09:03Ta1sha
aww I was wondering what happened to Diana.
09/04/2023 09:03Ta1sha
yay thank you for the info of how she changed her name Awsome. I got inpatient I should have known you got this
09/04/2023 09:02mercy A
I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them
09/04/2023 09:02mercy A
I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...
09/04/2023 09:02mercy A
I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...
09/04/2023 09:02mercy A
I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...
09/04/2023 08:57im excited to read your next book. the first two were great! it was a great ending for the 2and book.
09/04/2023 08:55Ta1sha
wow that was a powerful chapter I’m even in more tears than the previous chapters.
09/04/2023 08:55Selene Murf
Great chapter, finally after 3 yrs they can hold and smell each other. Gave me warm fuzzies. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Cant wait for more.
09/04/2023 08:53I hated Neron at first, as I'm sure everyone did. however now he's changed so much and I stg I will be entirely heart broken for months to come if this book closes without them together in the end
09/04/2023 08:53pushing wet strands of my hair behind his ear.? I think that would be difficult if not, painful to do...
09/04/2023 08:52mercy A
I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...
09/04/2023 08:51Sabrina Surillo
is kiya the same person as halima
09/04/2023 08:49Fale
😂 here goes Onyx again 🤣
09/04/2023 08:48mercy A
finally!!
09/04/2023 08:47mercy A
I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...
09/04/2023 08:46mercy A
I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...
09/04/2023 08:46mercy A
I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...
09/04/2023 08:46Loving the updates!
09/04/2023 08:46Mavis Gugumi
love the book. but hate the app..it does not work.
09/04/2023 08:44Kaelan McLaren
yay I can finally get a chance to do some theorising while not being on catch up. so my theory based on the last chapter - the nightmare- Nerons mother is about to reveal that they are related to a seer (or this world similar version) and the dreams they have been having real late prophetic.
09/04/2023 08:44Victoria DeCuir Stewart
so no resolutions or aswers for a whole book. not even anything on the owl, was she marked, did they find out she was assaulted… all those chapters and I can’t figure out what can to an actual ending point.
09/04/2023 08:42Sara Rastellini
already 100xs better than the alphas virgin tribute!!!
09/04/2023 08:41Victoria McCormick
this is haha down one of the best stories I have read since twilight! such a good story! such an amazing author!
09/04/2023 08:41Antoinette Robinson
now she knows she should not have went to the bathroom and by herself at that. it’s an emergency go home right away!!😫
09/04/2023 08:40Selene Murf
Unbreakable... Yusssssssss. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Thanx can't wait for more!!! 😁
09/04/2023 08:39XcaosxX
wonderful story thank you 😊
09/04/2023 08:38
Nina072
if you dont understand trauma and its effects on an individual that's fine but do not make cold and callused comments and think nothing of it. just goes to show how little some people know about trauma. cold, callused and so unbelievably rude fictional character or not. person who made that comment, you deserve a knock upside the heard for that comment. and I'm being nice. "it's been eight years.....blah blah blah". unfrackingbelievable.
09/04/2023 08:38Suspiro Vega
very good book cant put it down
09/04/2023 08:38this is one of the best storys I have ever read . hope you let these two have a love together and peace soon . I don't know why but I feel their pain as if it is my own . very emotional.
09/04/2023 08:37
Jenny Fox 🦊
Wishing you the best for your new Story Marii!! 💕
09/04/2023 08:37Antoinette Robinson
keeping her friends in the dark is putting everyone in danger
09/04/2023 08:37
Nicole Fisher
After reading this, I am speechless. I'd like to read more.
09/04/2023 08:36Toya Spalding
What is the update time-line please?
09/04/2023 08:36can someone pleaseee help me understand the order of the books for the storyline. I know there two books in unbreakable and another one being starred but does unhinged come before or after the new one being started?
09/04/2023 08:36Sara Rastellini
goddess this story tugs at the heart strings bravo 👏
09/04/2023 08:35Amy Krohn
thank you for you author's note.
09/04/2023 08:35Carla McGuire
Am really enjoying your writing.
09/04/2023 08:34Sharon Taylor
when is the new book
09/04/2023 08:34Prudin Bernier
hoping new chapters are added soon. love this story.
09/04/2023 08:34mercy A
I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...
09/04/2023 08:34Katie Frew
I'm still finding it hard to believe a whole pack of people believe a 9 year old killed a massive luna wolf and child. I understand you saying they just wanted someone to blame. But still that part to me is a little far fetch, a 9 year old child that can't turn into a wolf so has no strength. You get where I'm going with this...
09/04/2023 08:33thank you for standing up and supporting the survivors. it means the world.
09/04/2023 08:32is this the end of the story or will there be more..?? I wanted Kiya n Neron to be mates so badly..
09/04/2023 08:32Abigail Ross
why does her name suddenly change??
09/04/2023 08:31Michelle F. Rivera
whose kiya??? last couple chapters are titled that. but no name in story matches
09/04/2023 08:31Sintia
This book had me crying!!!! 😭
09/04/2023 08:30mercy A
how often are new chapters released? can’t wait to know what will happen at the alphas gathering...
09/04/2023 08:30Latoya Doctor
this book hart breaking
09/04/2023 08:30Lori Platz
I hope she doesn't go to Neron, what they did is unforgivable, mates or not
09/04/2023 08:29Alexus Winder
what is the update period?
09/04/2023 08:29I take that back, there’s 2 orisha mentions!!! 🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:29Catherine Thompson
loving this so far
09/04/2023 08:29Novalore
chapter 52 made me lmao oh no he took off his shirt. oh hell
09/04/2023 08:28Blue Eyes
how long before unbreakable comes out
09/04/2023 08:27
HNW TK
can't wait for book 3
09/04/2023 08:27Heather P
Do do you think pigeons have feelings? hahaha 🤣🤣🤣 I literally laughed out loud
09/04/2023 08:27Ta1sha
already on chapter 31 so nervous
09/04/2023 08:27I finished this a little over a month ago, can you give us an idea when Unbreakable will be released?
09/04/2023 08:27
bisaayanna
I think it is the uncle they thought they killed and he has created a puppet clone
09/04/2023 08:27Kate Carney Taylor
when will book 3 be available
09/04/2023 08:27I hope that kiya & nueron get together in there end. great story so far though.
09/04/2023 08:27Selene Murf
Guessing the mate bond will need to be made between Luna and Alpha, to get rid of Osrisis
09/04/2023 08:26
Luna Gudine
there's so many number issues, lol, i like the story but the yrs don't add up... 😅
09/04/2023 08:26Ta1sha
Nero deserves to suffer so does everyone in that pack no pity for their guilt. Guilt does not make everything ok. They could better themselves and learn from it.
09/04/2023 08:26Tanesha Gillespie
update on when you post new chapters please
09/04/2023 08:26Aiiyah Montero
This story is sooo inspiring 💓 and has brought me to tears more times than I’d like to admit lol! I literally love this book 😍
09/04/2023 08:25Fale
😂 here goes Onyx again 🤣
09/04/2023 08:25🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:25his father is a straight jerk and I hope that he gets exactly what's coming to him. he has absolutely no remorse for his actions against Halima
09/04/2023 08:24Reader-205517
I like this story. But your comments at the end of the chapter are very annoying. A professional author does not do that.
09/04/2023 08:24Marissa Margarida Raymer Alves
are you going to finish the book?
09/04/2023 08:24
