The Mafia & Ruthless Billionaire Comments
Shreelagna Mohanty
hey author when u r comparing something's to a god plz let the Male one's be god not godess
09/04/2023 08:36Shreelagna Mohanty
writing can be improved but I like ur story if u bring out a little more emotion and correct the grammatical errors then it would be dope
09/04/2023 08:08
NaLu4love
I must say....... the plot and all r amazing but ur way of writing is a little amateurish..... and I'm not trying to insult you or anything...... just saying that u can edit it and make it better
09/04/2023 07:06
Mhauyon💖
✌️
09/04/2023 07:03
Alicia Rodriguez
good storyline but terrible writing skills
09/04/2023 06:58
M Yumna
great book keep writing👍💜
09/04/2023 06:58
sweet Ali
hi i am a new reader i am loving it so much
09/04/2023 06:55
