Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) टिप्पणियाँ
Iyshia Wells
What I've read so far has me completely captivated it's such a gripping tale with only a few words the story has only just begun and I'm already on the edge of my seat. Wonderful.
09/04/2023 07:05
Reader-273693
I really hAte this story. I can’t tell which part was the current moment or events that was happening in the past or in her head. it has that comic strip feeling to it. don’t like it at all
09/04/2023 07:05Yoichi Takashi
So far, I love how the story flows and works together. And the characters are super lovable. Well, some are. XD So glad that I said yes when the writer offered to send me a sample chapter. I'm very impressed with all of it so far. ^^
09/04/2023 07:05
Fateema Saad Gidado
reading here is harder for me but I must say your book deserves every ounce of love reads, vote and comments it's so amazing it flows fluently the grammar and punctuations we're just perfect even though your type of writing is the descriptive I still like the way your describe.bravo. excellent work
09/04/2023 07:05thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:05
christi ga
I really love this book. The writer asked me to read it and this book is really good.
09/04/2023 07:05Anna Hurtado
Read it all in one day. Can’t wait to read the 2 book to find our what happen next to Alpha Kane and Ember.
09/04/2023 07:05Sara Blake
interesting story so far🤗 Keep it up!
09/04/2023 07:05Faith Williams
The combination of supernatural elements is so cool! I love the book so far, I wish I could read the rest😣
09/04/2023 07:05Kuri -chan
it's beautiful! i've read just this for now but it's beautiful QwQ
09/04/2023 07:05jozlyn crespo
The writer reached out to me and asked if I would like to read some parts of it, and I said yes of course, and asked if I would check out their book. I said yes, and am now loving this book. The story hooks you in and flows like a river
09/04/2023 07:05Afreen&afsheen Shaik
l love this story already
09/04/2023 07:05
Esha Smiley
I love this book
09/04/2023 07:05thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:05Anna Hurtado
Love this story.
09/04/2023 07:05
Nameera khan
The story is interesting but the plot is all over the place. Would have liked it better if it flowed well. And maybe had some introductions of the characters layed out properly. A bit of plit and sentence structural issues need to be fixed. All in all a good book
09/04/2023 07:05thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:05MidnightHarmone
I found this on Wp as the author recommended it to me. the book is very interesting and I love the the mystery the chapters hold, it's very intriguing, and the story flows very nicely, it's enjoyable and super entertaining.
09/04/2023 07:05
Myrinnado
Your story is interesting, full of life and adventures that have not been written anywhere. Your gift of writing stories is also remarkable and make the most of that gift. I'm glad you came to me because missing a story like this is simply a sin. Love you and your stories ❤️! Keep going!
09/04/2023 07:05thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:05Sketchy Blue
I was shown this story by the editor and this far I really enjoy what I've seen! it has some great story and very interesting well written characters. It by far has a beautiful way with it's description to get characters moods across. I don't find this stuff often so it's a one of a kind to me!
09/04/2023 07:05
Sinethemba Mbambo
hi, I am on WP as Addict, I love the writing style first off. And this story is layered so nicely with the MC's struggles being so believable and support the reason why she has to toughen up and get herself together. Lovely plot, but the roles of many type supernaturals in one story could be overwhelming, I hope the author pulls this off.
09/04/2023 07:05thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:05Myrinnado
Your story is interesting, full of life and adventures that have not been written anywhere. Your gift of writing stories is also remarkable and make the most of that gift. I'm glad you came to me because missing a story like this is simply a sin. Love you and your stories ❤️! Keep going!
09/04/2023 07:05
some-scott
this is great; the story starts out with a light, somewhat comedic tone and the whole thing flows very nicely
09/04/2023 07:05Myrinnado
Your story is interesting, full of life and adventures that have not been written anywhere. Your gift of writing stories is also remarkable and make the most of that gift. I'm glad you came to me because missing a story like this is simply a sin. Love you and your stories ❤️! Keep going!
09/04/2023 07:05
Trinity Gardner
though i’ve only read a few chapters, i can confidently say the writing in this book is absolutely phenomenal!! the characters all have dimension to them and the protagonist (from description) is a woc which is something i don’t see often in werewolf books but is greatly appreciated!!
09/04/2023 07:05thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:05Myrinnado
Your story is interesting, full of life and adventures that have not been written anywhere. Your gift of writing stories is also remarkable and make the most of that gift. I'm glad you came to me because missing a story like this is simply a sin. Love you and your stories ❤️! Keep going!
09/04/2023 07:05
Megan
❤️
09/04/2023 07:05
Sassysam
interesting read, thanks to the editor for the recommendation.
09/04/2023 07:05thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:05Myrinnado
Your story is interesting, full of life and adventures that have not been written anywhere. Your gift of writing stories is also remarkable and make the most of that gift. I'm glad you came to me because missing a story like this is simply a sin. Love you and your stories ❤️! Keep going!
09/04/2023 07:05
Nneka Obiukwu
ok it's cool. had a chance to start reading today. nice story
09/04/2023 07:05Oliwia Walczyńska
i love this, i prefer fanfictions but this book is so cool
09/04/2023 07:05
Shi Angel
I read it...and it's interesting.. I love it
09/04/2023 07:05Black Golden Cherries
I actually remember coming across this book and I’m even more happy that the author contacted me to give it a look didn’t even read a full chapter and I know I have to see more
09/04/2023 07:05
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09/04/2023 07:05Ronellie Rivera
First part almost made me stop reading, I thought this was another "Im rejected because Im an omega and Im gonna go sulk in the corner" type of story. The unveiling of the story in the first chapter made me turn the pages. I want to read more.
09/04/2023 07:05thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:05Andrea Jerue-Paulley
Just full disclosure, a wizard, warlock, witch, Wiccan or Pagan, are unisex titles. I would know, I'm a Witch 😊. A warlock is also a traitor and should not be used interchangeably with the others. In fact, they all have their own meanings and similarities.
09/04/2023 07:05thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:05
Dawn Michels
absolutely loved it couldn't stop reading till the end Irish there was more to the story,like their wedding.
09/04/2023 07:05Namki Teroll
I found this book because the editor asked me to read several chapters. Now I stopped reading such books, but I have to admit that this story is quite interesting. I love the dialogues, the conflict and how the story is presented in general. But sometimes the pace is too quick, but maybe it's just seems to me. Therefore, a solid 9 out of 10.
09/04/2023 07:05
lil-Mz
I love the story, I love the drama, I love the action, I love the romance, I love everything about this book. I'm so glad I was asked to check it out. it an amazing piece of writing😍 can't wait to read more of your books🥰
09/04/2023 07:05
Mariah Stangl
This is a really well written story with a good plot. I think that this book could go really far. The author has a good storyline. They are a real storyteller.
09/04/2023 07:05
Selene
I was asked by the editor to give a review on the story. Love how relatable Ember is and the overall flow of the story. I can't stop reading, love it🌈
09/04/2023 07:05Violet Walsh
omg this is so good. the writing style is amazing and although i’ve seen this idea used before, so far the author kind of twists it so it’s original to them. and so far i’m really loving the MC
09/04/2023 07:05
Ala Ahamad
to be honest I was little hesitant but I don’t I regret reading it I actually loved the prologue but I’m not a huge fan of fairytal vibes or sappy romance. I’m a person who likes a little bit of everything but I actually really enjoyed this thank you for recommending this 😁😁
09/04/2023 07:05Violet Walsh
omg this is so good. the writing style is amazing and although i’ve seen this idea used before, so far the author kind of twists it so it’s original to them. and so far i’m really loving the MC
09/04/2023 07:05
Bgirl-
this story is so good, usually the same genre as this story make me bored, but when I read this story make me want to keep reading again and yeah i love it! 👍😊 sorry i'm not good in english but i I hope my comment can be understood 😊😊
09/04/2023 07:05
Apinde Owuoth
awsome book can read it without taking any breaks. thank you to the author for recommending it
09/04/2023 07:05Naphilahun Biam
I'm really glad the editor recommended me this amazing story. I was filled with amazement with the passing of each chapter. I really love the plot and the way the story flows smoothly.
09/04/2023 07:05Shannon LedBetter
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN YEARS AND I DO MEAN YEARS SINCE I ENJOYED A STORY THIS MUCH. I have been having a hard time lately and being able to lose it all for a few hours to read this has been the best therapy in the world. thank u from the bottom of my heart.
09/04/2023 07:05Karicia Swaby
Great book tbh.
09/04/2023 07:05Isabella Carley
I love this story it is very intresting and has captured my attention
09/04/2023 07:05
joonieuwuhobi
Whoa i started read it .......its so addictive!!!
09/04/2023 07:05
jeongsanjeon97
I found this book through wp and I already read a few chapters and it is really interesting and can’t wait to read the rest 😄
09/04/2023 07:05Reader-806437
I love it!
09/04/2023 07:05wonders.xo
I've read a few chapters so far the story is interesting and amazing. I feel like as the story goes by it's going to be more amazing
09/04/2023 07:05
Mimi Queen
It's one of of the best books I have ever read. There are no grammatical mistakes and the story unraveles at a brisk pace. It's overall an amazing book and I'm going to recommend it to other people.
09/04/2023 07:05Mar S
I was on wattpas when the writer recommended me the book. I am not english so had few difficulties but the story is amazing and I recommend it! I'm so glad writer writer to me and recommended me! Keep up this nice work!
09/04/2023 07:05It's Jazzy
I'm a few chapters into the story, from what I've read so far I really enjoy the way this was written, I really like this story I want to thank the writer for recommending this to me.
09/04/2023 07:05
johnny seo
i was approached by the editor on WP and i've to say, this story definitely worth to read. im kinda the picky person when it comes to genre but i'd only read few chaps and this story is very interesting and enjoyable to the point that i'll recommend this book to all of my friends. keep up the good work author, god bless you!
09/04/2023 07:05Kay2me 12
This was a great book! I would definitely re-read, the writing was really smooth and there weren't any points were I was confused about something happening. it was clear and not something so easy I was bored either.
09/04/2023 07:05
Niesha Constant
this book was amazing I love it ❤️
09/04/2023 07:05
Pelin Demircioglu
you go girl, you go! she found confidence in hitting her mate without a mask. is it just me or does that not sound really right? nah, he kind of asked for it for all the hardships he put her through
09/04/2023 07:05Myrinnado
I love this story!!!!!!!!!!
09/04/2023 07:05Laweengeen Khaan
thanks to the author who recommended me this book, even tho ive read the first four chapters only, its still so enjoyable and i can really imagine things happening like the way author described everything was amazing, and the storyline of course the storyline so far is really good. so people im loving this.
09/04/2023 07:05Lemon's Crib
I'm so glad the writer recommended this. The story has a nice plot and flow. I'm still on the first three chapters but it's already getting interesting and entertaining. The story knows how to captivate and thrill the readers. I love it! 💜
09/04/2023 07:05
Tago Guriras
The book is very well written and captivating , which is hard to come by lately. I love the characters and how the book just flows. It honestly deserves to be on the selves along with other great books and big sellers.
09/04/2023 07:05Myrinnado
I love this story!!!!!!!!!!
09/04/2023 07:05Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
09/04/2023 07:05Maithreyi My3
that was fab
09/04/2023 07:05
Beans Beans
the writer of this book recommended it to me and I’m very glad they did. it’s very entertaining and a good read.
09/04/2023 07:05Myrinnado
😻😻😻
09/04/2023 07:05Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
09/04/2023 07:05Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
09/04/2023 07:05aashi bhatnagar
beautifully written chapters❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:05
Sonia Rodriguez
This book is actually so great!! I like the plot and storyline. Very well written and definitely recommend!!!
09/04/2023 07:05Romesa Naeem
i found this story when the author asked me to try it out and its already got me hooked and I've only read the first few chapters...really professional writing and has already got me hooked
09/04/2023 07:05
Diamond reads stuff
This is a good story so far! You have more potiental of becoming a better writer than I will
09/04/2023 07:05Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
09/04/2023 07:05Diamond reads stuff
This is a good story so far! You have more potiental of becoming a better writer than I will
09/04/2023 07:05Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
09/04/2023 07:05
Sofi Rose
The author asked me to check this out, and I am so so glad they did because this is so good! Just from the few chapters I have read, I can tell it’s gonna be amazing all the way through.
09/04/2023 07:05ajju rahen
already read rejected stories. so cliche but at the same time not. Entertainment- yes full on.I like to torture myself with sad heartbroken stories like this so that's what it's hit there. I like it very much didn't read full so gonna continue.
09/04/2023 07:05Audrey Danielle Sacdalan
Amazing... all I can say is that its amazing..
09/04/2023 07:05Huda Rehman
like so many other people i also found out about this book through whattpad. the writer asked me to review it and i said yes, and I'm glad i did this story is really good almost addictive. props to the writer :)
09/04/2023 07:05Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
09/04/2023 07:05
Bri_chan0
I jus read the first chapter and that was like: Hey, thats pretty good. I really like it. Good job <3
09/04/2023 07:05Shannariza Kaisi
I love the concept of the story it’s so interesting at the same time entertaining, I hope this story will get all the support and appreciations it deserves.
09/04/2023 07:05Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
09/04/2023 07:05Cuban __Puertorican
So glad the author found me and recommended this book💕
09/04/2023 07:05Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
09/04/2023 07:05BlazingHowlerWolf
This is a really good book, I still have more to read but from what I have read it's really good.
09/04/2023 07:05Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
09/04/2023 07:05AimeeVi
Awesome story it all connected with each chapter very well.
09/04/2023 07:05BlazingHowlerWolf
This is a really good book, I still have more to read but from what I have read it's really good.
09/04/2023 07:05Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
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