Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) टिप्पणियाँ
Jeon Taekook
I love this story! It's just like one of the ones that just takes you and you can't stop... I've already read two chapters and I was like WOOOOOOOOOW.
09/04/2023 07:06MidnightWolf_stories
It hooks you in and keeps you hooked. I’ve only read a few chapters so far but I’m excited to read the rest of the book.
09/04/2023 07:06Carolina Contreras Valdez
I love his story !!!
09/04/2023 07:06
KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06Nikki P
awesome story man I really love the plot!!!
09/04/2023 07:06
Abrahamoln Lincoln
Honestly, the story is written in a professional way. I love the way this story is flowing and proceeding. I want the author to work more and one day publish a book like other writers. You are great author. I love the story and would recommend everyone to read this cause it's really good and not a waste of time.
09/04/2023 07:06luna765
I am in love with this book already. It's not the most common thing again and again. I really like it. Author, u have done a great job
09/04/2023 07:06qutipie
i luv this ( ･ω･)☞♥️
09/04/2023 07:06Persefone2002
I like it a lot!!! It's amazing! I don't have words to describe this! I really appreaciate it :3
09/04/2023 07:06
Sevda_Mq
😍😍😍😍😍
09/04/2023 07:06
tiktokk2020
this is so good
09/04/2023 07:06Leah Valdez Romo
The writer recommend this to me and it is really enjoyable. This story has a really good plot line.
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06
Raven-fangirlXx
There are a lot of fics like this with similar character tropes and cliches, the only difference between them i found was how well written they were. Out of all the poorly written ones ive been unfortunate to find, this one is by far one of the better written ones with well placed thought for every detail. 👍👍
09/04/2023 07:06polar 444
it's amazing friend 😄
09/04/2023 07:06Natalia Washington
😂 get you a friend like this, that’ll pretend to be your crush so you can feel their abs
09/04/2023 07:06Heather Neumann
It has been a long time since a ware story caught and held my attention to the point that I stayed up to the wee hours of the morning to read it. This one did that. I found myself unable to put it down
09/04/2023 07:06Princéss Lée
quick question is she a black girl? I’m a little confused
09/04/2023 07:06Youremypizzaman
this is gonna be so much fun
09/04/2023 07:06polar 444
it's amazing friend
09/04/2023 07:06Luna K
This book really hooked my attention! I’m glad that they recommended me their book. It’s very enjoyable and really engages you into the plot. The book almost feels as if you’re in it, simply watching the whole drama play out while you sit back eating popcorn.
09/04/2023 07:06
Crystal Chambers
I'm so happy I agreed to read this story it's awesome already
09/04/2023 07:06Luna K
This book really hooked my attention! I’m glad that they recommended me their book. It’s very enjoyable and really engages you into the plot. The book almost feels as if you’re in it, simply watching the whole drama play out while you sit back eating popcorn.
09/04/2023 07:06Cleo Daniles
so I was asked to check out this story and I must say this is one of the best wolf books I have ever read.Its definelty in my top 2. I wasn't able to complete the book but as far as I got.it was amazing. The way the character expresses herself Is great. and I just loved the first chapter. usually alphas just except their mate but In this books its different.she gets rejected but yet shows herself strong.I really wish I could read further .its great book and I HIGHLY recommend it.Its super entertaining and the first chapter Is enjoyable.I like the use of words.beautiful written.I give this books 11/10
09/04/2023 07:06
Sapphire_Ravenclaw
The Story is amazing. I have read only few chapters and i am already captivated by the plot. I have read several alpha stories, but this one is a nice change.
09/04/2023 07:06
Joanna Oliva
I was asked to review this book and honestly, I like how it's so normal when the theme is Supernatural. It's very relatable and easily connects with the readers, even if the characters come from a different world and some details are not applicable to us. I wish I could read more of the chapters, because it was getting realliy interesting. This books is very entertaining and relatable, that's all I could say.
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06Kiara Beielry
I really love it so far
09/04/2023 07:06
Minsungbebitos
The writer recommended me to read this book and the truth is that it is very good, I'm just reading a few chapters but this is amazing, i really recommended to read this ^^
09/04/2023 07:06
Zeba Aslam
I enjoyed the book. The moment I read the first chapter, I was instantly hooked and I knew I was going to enjoy reading it. I love how the whole story flowed smoothly. I liked Ember , even though she has low self esteem she still was very brave and she's a very strong person. I also really liked Aster. I was sad about her death. she's was one of my favourite characters. she brave, badass and a great friend. The story was constructed and well thought out and the plot of the story was great. It was a good book to read. I enjoyed reading it.
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06
Socaseya
I'm so glad I agree to read it. No regrets, the plot is very well built, I only read the first chapter and it already captured my attention. Thank you for recommending this to me.
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06Hannah Fischer
From what I’ve read so far, this story is addicting! The twists and turns are there ( as they should be), and this story takes you on a journey into an omegas life.
09/04/2023 07:06
snub scrub
The author recommended me this and I feel so happy they did like WOW I fell in love when I read those few sample chapters sent !!!
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06sakura haruno
wow this book is amazing it very interesting love it
09/04/2023 07:06Yovanda Astuti
Thanks to the Author, for recommending this story to me. I love a well flowing storyline, an interesting groove, and a good characteristic in this story 🥺
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06Touka Youki Chan
It is a good story and has a great writing, from what little I have been able to read this really entertaining.
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06
Angel Mathetha
I'm so glad the editor of this book recommended it to me! It's a brilliant book and grasps your attention! The entire story is just amazing!
09/04/2023 07:06
Azucena Aiza
woah im so excited
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06SamShine
This was so good and I fell in love with all the characters ❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:06
12342234344334
The story prologue caught my attention and my curiosity to the story to continue to read.Thanks to the writer that recommended it to me.
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06Sandy Goh
The author of this book recommended me to read it and I’m definitely not regretting it. This book is thrilling :)
09/04/2023 07:06rachelafrique
Wow! What a rollercoaster of emotions! I laughed, I cried, and I got super mad. I really enjoyed the book. I love how when I got angry with the MC for being stupid she would also call herself stupid! Lol. And we were made to understand why she is the way she is as we got to know more about her background and her past. However, It could use some editing and time labels/headings to dinstinguish between real time and flashbacks. It was hard to determine whether something was in the past or the future which got really confusing.
09/04/2023 07:06Suzana Wolf Juras
so far great...love werewolf stories
09/04/2023 07:06Rabia Adnan
I came to know abt dis book wid d help f wp.... Amazing plot, have read few chaps, n already loving it❤️
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06Psychie Guevarra
I am so glad that the writer had recommended this story to me. It really did suit my taste in terms of werewolves stories. In every chapters that I have read, it keeps giving me the vibe I long ought to feel while I’m reading. So kudos to the writer and to its story. You filled my nerdy heart with joy!
09/04/2023 07:06Ariel Vargas
I was sent a link to this story and a few chapters. from what I’ve read so far I like this story and recommend it to others to read
09/04/2023 07:06Meg Connor
loving what I read so far ,the story line is so interesting can't wait to read more and find out what happens. I normally get bored after a while of story's but I can't put this story down
09/04/2023 07:06
Matema Baloyi
great prologue
09/04/2023 07:06Rouqaya M
Right so where do I begin. I’ve only read a few chapters of this story and not gonna lie, I’m hooked. This story is very well written and I gotta applaud the author. The descriptions were so well that I could picture each scene. I even felt my heart beat quicker at some scenes. What I personally really enjoy in books is when the author makes the readers confused and wonder. Which has been very well demonstrated here. In terms of the plot, I really love how the story is going so far, it’s interesting and very good. There are a few cliche ideas and characters, however it has been written well which I’m not mad about. Overall, I really recommend reading this book.
09/04/2023 07:06
Yagen Toushi
I just received a recommendation from someone through Wp and i immediately downloaded it. Actually i love this story, but there are so many chapters that locked so i stop reading it😭
09/04/2023 07:06Matema Baloyi
great prologue
09/04/2023 07:06KaleidoscopicBitch
The editor sent me this story to my wt to review and i gotta say, while it's not the kind i would normaly read, it IS good. You can notice some characters are clichés, but those aren't too overbearing at least on the few chapters i've read (and the whole modern-fantasy underlying theme is really interesting, so that's a plus) i'm not a big fan of Kane being an "asshole alpha" or Ember being submissive around him even when she has her own flair (or maybe i'm biased cuz i like power bottoms better, who knows-), but maybe that changes later on the story. Anyway, if someone else likes this kind of story, then i would recommend it. Reading was enjoyable, the writting is very well done and the pacing is good, which is a rare thing to come across nowadays tbh-
09/04/2023 07:06
Gold__Grace--
I also found this book through when the writer recommended it and I'm glad s/he did . the books amazing
09/04/2023 07:06
Natalia
so far I think the story is really good! I like how it is progressing and im very curious about the next chapter! keep up the good work!
09/04/2023 07:06Lucaon Selvior
I like the story is very good, it caught me from the beginning, it has a very good narrative.
09/04/2023 07:06
BTSFAN JJ
the creator recommended me this and I thought it was a good book so now I am reading this
09/04/2023 07:06Lucaon Selvior
I like the story is very good, it caught me from the beginning, it has a very good narrative.
09/04/2023 07:06
mahmoudah shittu
Omggg!!!!!this is very niceeee
09/04/2023 07:06
Bella
This is a great story! It really stands out to me.
09/04/2023 07:06
Zuleima A. Rodriguez
@Amina Adamou congratulations on your success. quite an entertaining book. 😁☺️😍❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:06
Gina Uhde
This Book is amazing and I really love the storyline of this. it’s really well written and it is just exiting to know what will happen next.
09/04/2023 07:06
-Taika- Wp
I liked it! The story is well written, characters are likable enough (except Kane, that man is an asshole) and everything flows well which is a good sign. I absolutely loved the BuzzFeed unsolved reference because I've seen all of the episodes and I'm a big fan of the series. But as I said I'm not into werewolves or werewolf stories anymore so I probably won't continue reading it. That is just my opinion though, so it doesn't mean the story is bad and I'm glad to see positive reviews in the comments. Thank you for recommending me this book and even though "Alpha Kane" wasn't to my taste I hope you found the feedback I gave satisfactory :)
09/04/2023 07:06
zheva achana
I came here because of a recommendation ... I like your story ... I hope in the future you can make a story with another dark romance genre😊
09/04/2023 07:06
Park22min
I must say that the story captivated me just by reading the introduction, I rarely find such interesting stories. In each chapter the story unfolds and hypnotizes you to the point of imagining what you are reading and that you cannot stop reading. Intrigue and mystery mix and produce an adrenaline rush that increases with each episode and leaves you wanting more. I'm starting to read it and hope to finish it soon. PS: I recommend it 100%, you will not regret reading it 💕
09/04/2023 07:06Nur Waheeda
it's just 2 chapter, but enough making me hate Kane to the bone
09/04/2023 07:06
jasy bd
you have perfectly explained the actions and feelings of the protagonist. it keeps you in suspense right from the start. I bet it’s a wonderful story but sadly I couldn’t read that. my apologies
09/04/2023 07:06-Taika- Wp
I liked it! The story is well written, characters are likable enough (except Kane, that man is an asshole) and everything flows well which is a good sign. I absolutely loved the BuzzFeed unsolved reference because I've seen all of the episodes and I'm a big fan of the series. But as I said I'm not into werewolves or werewolf stories anymore so I probably won't continue reading it. That is just my opinion though, so it doesn't mean the story is bad and I'm glad to see positive reviews in the comments. Thank you for recommending me this book and even though "Alpha Kane" wasn't to my taste I hope you found the feedback I gave satisfactory :)
09/04/2023 07:06
Zuschia27🦄☘
The story is nice but a little bit predictable and try to take impossible plot. So the readers will think your story a puzzle game.Also make your protagonist cold as ice and a girl with a strong personality to match the capability of his partner. But in all it's interesting story. Good luck and God bless you!
09/04/2023 07:06Denise Demon
let's talk about this consent though
09/04/2023 07:06
Bts Suga Fan
Wow this story is really good keep up the great work
09/04/2023 07:06kim bunny myeon
thanks to the author i get to know abt this story....nd i reallg really like it❤❤
09/04/2023 07:06Jellene Aerielle Cacnio Tiangco
i love the story
09/04/2023 07:06-Taika- Wp
I liked it! The story is well written, characters are likable enough (except Kane, that man is an asshole) and everything flows well which is a good sign. I absolutely loved the BuzzFeed unsolved reference because I've seen all of the episodes and I'm a big fan of the series. But as I said I'm not into werewolves or werewolf stories anymore so I probably won't continue reading it. That is just my opinion though, so it doesn't mean the story is bad and I'm glad to see positive reviews in the comments. Thank you for recommending me this book and even though "Alpha Kane" wasn't to my taste I hope you found the feedback I gave satisfactory :)
09/04/2023 07:06Aaliyah Fenty
ayy bodak yellow
09/04/2023 07:06
Lovely.Z21
ITS GETTING WILD
09/04/2023 07:06Stephanie Ladi
I got asked to read the story and write a review. The prologue got me intrigued, and I wanted to read more to see how ends. I must say I loved it
09/04/2023 07:06
Ayanda Makhathini
This book like real good can't wait to read more🌞
09/04/2023 07:06Amanda Awesome
This book is set out amazingly. Such a smooth read. Definitely loved it.
09/04/2023 07:06
wolfpack rocks
I found out about this on watpad and im glad I did!! I'm still currently reading it but I love the story!
09/04/2023 07:06
Stellou DDV
Good description !
09/04/2023 07:06Selina Katherine Belle Libiran
thanks for the recommendation, i actually love stories where the the heroine is physically strong. and with the few chapters i've read so far, i think this will be an awesome read.
09/04/2023 07:06Georgie Reid
is chapter 40 the end? hope not!
09/04/2023 07:06Ronellie Rivera
A whole package! Warewolves, hybrids, trolls, faeries and the Russians in one fighting scene! What could I ask for more?!
09/04/2023 07:06Nobody Special
When I first read the prologue I was like: “What is this!?” “Alphas, omegas and werewolf’s!? I hate stuff like that!!” “I’m out!” But then when the story first started to progress and make sense to me, I was like: “Magic?! Supernatural people!? Sign me up!!” “This is amazing!” “People who can write!! Use paragraphs, emotion and words and not make it cringe!!!!” “WHY I THANK THEE FOR THY WRITINGS AND IMAGINATION!!”
09/04/2023 07:06Alejandra prosper
I find the idea of this book pretty interesting and the narrative is not bad, the only thing is that I feel this book is not really for me. I have some problems with some of the characters, and not because they are not wrote well, but because I find the main characters prespective of her life and situation pretty unatractive (I don't know if I explained myself correctly). I think I would have more interest on a character that even if she knows she if pretty fragil because if her problems as an omega she does not accept being despised or not valued as someone to count on, like glass for example, if you hit it hard enough it will break, but if you try to step on it you get cutted. Also on the first and second chapter I had some problems triying to understand what was going on, and even if for some readers find this atractive and gets them interested some of us can just drop a story if you don't plant an interesting part the plot soon enough. You usually need to get your readers interested about an aspect of the main character (like a part of their personality or dreams for the future, or even something about their moral) or of the plot ( like for example how the world you built has some rules and what this really means, or meaby highlight the difference between your world and the real one to make the readers imagine situations that know are possible... but for plot intrige there are too many possibilities and I only centered mine around the world because is usually something that atracts me a lot but it could be anything ). This last point is not such a big problem but I personaly think it takes some points off your story. I'm just giving my opinion about this and I'm not triying to offend anyone, just wanted to make a rewiew completely loyal to my opinion. If you disagree with me a will be happy to have a respectfull debate on the coments. Also please sorry if something I wrote doesn't make complete sense, english is not my first language and sometimes It can cause troubles.Thank you to anyone who read the whole thing, I sometimes get really side traked and make them long, but well, have a nice day! (◠‿◕)
09/04/2023 07:06
Dakota
I’m only able to read the first few chapters but they were so immersive and well written! I love the plot and wish I could’ve kept reading, it’s just such a good book and one that you can read for ages without tiring as it stays interesting.
09/04/2023 07:06Aī Ortilano
first chapter , i am really amaze , i can see those emotions the heroin felt , im feeling more excited to read this book until the last chapter , this kind of story is what im looking for , the type that your getting more giddy to know everything on what will happen in end
09/04/2023 07:06
notrussell_
❤️
09/04/2023 07:06Rupsa Majumder
a person from wp recommend this to me, And now after reading few chapters I'm really enjoying this book.🖤😊
09/04/2023 07:06
MinnieCassava
This a very good story. It was refreshing to wait on knowing who the main character was. The story isn't fast paced nor is it too slow.
09/04/2023 07:06yen nhi nguyen
I got to know this story after the author introduced it to me. This is an interesting story
09/04/2023 07:06
Catto✨
I AM ALREADY LOVING IT~
09/04/2023 07:06
