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Amóra Banks

so did yhu rewrite the story or something or just changed the names to chapters?

Amóra Banks

question how is it that Landon was supposed to come back with the news about Loren and Macy a d not l Jared?

Thenightingale

alrighty! so Mated to the Lycan King will officially be on this platform; I'm so excited. the easiest way to access it is via my author profile! it should be up soon!

Thenightingale

hi everyone! so I have been in the process of writing another novel. The title of it is Mated to the Lycan King. I tried to use the link for it but it doesn't seem to work. you can view it by clicking on my author profile and scrolling to the bottom. if you still cannot find it, let me know! looking forward to hearing your thoughts!

x8d9 i couldn’t put this down. this is my kind of book. can’t wait to read more of it.

zira

x8d9 this story is awesome...i want to commend the writer...welldone author..i cant drop this book..ill follow this author from now on

x8d9 I read ... or started reading this a long time ago. I found it wasn't my cup of tea. Kudos to the author for the efforts.

x8d9 #x8d9 oooooo this story sounds HOT just by reading the introduction. I can't wait to read it but I think I need to read it in private with no one around

Kimberly Wong

x8d9 Great storyline. I was glued to this book and had to finish it. So many different characters and backgrounds. Love it.

Danield

I gotta say you had me at the mark on her neck. Always a sexy look frm: Papi

Amóra Banks

how long til we get to see anyone else POV so far its jush Jasmine..

Thenightingale

I'm in the process of editing! the chapters which are numbered have been edited!✨

Thenightingale

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Tracy Davis

this is get good i need to read more

Ukeme Nsi

❤️

Thunsula Soni

good so far

Amanda

I have a bad feeling Macy is playing this game with Andrew and Lucien! She’s just as bad as they are. watch an see

Emily Chamberlain

the chapter titled Landon's heartbreak is missing a chunk of info.....Landon is going to take a shower and tells Jas that he lives across the hall....when she asks him what it skips to the diner scene.....do we find out why he moved in across the hall??

Dorla Gill

very good with correct grammar

Amanda Dickinson

this is when she needed to call her mate to help. 2 is better then one

Ke'Londa Escalante

she definitely overreacted.

Denette Gibson

she needs time to get herself together and regroup to get the job done.

Bridgette Montpetit

I am wondering what happened to your story "Her Birthright"?

I really enjoyed this book and can't wait to read about Lucien.

he’s an ass 🤣🤣🤣🤣

I was dreading that Jared comes back... how could you do that nightingale??? I loved Damon sooo much, he clearly is a completely different person than he was at the beginning of the story. He is pure and gold and loveable. Lucien on the other side is tainted black and red, he's disgusting and disturbing... I'm truly terrified now... I don't know who should win... But Loren already "died" they saw her off, maybe it's ok if she dies, no it's not ok of course but it would be maybe simpler bc Jared and Landon just got together... they deserve it. Loren has no one and Oliver can be dismissed anyway and Jasmine is with Damon. So... OMG!!!

Jenilee D

farther noose

Fiso Tusitala

love it thanks a lot

Wow, it's super thrilling and I'm so proud that she mastered to run away of those evil wolves Damon and Lucien. But I'm wondering if Damon knew everything about her and utterly controlled her how could he not know about Lucien and her Vixen job? And why was he mad at her about this? She was more or less like forced into this, right? And to the present: is she killing ppl as an assassin disguised as a Vixen? And who is this mysterious woman she gave the note to? Her new boss or more like a purchaser? She's definitely an alpha and it's so cool... will Damon and Lucien somehow come back into her life? Will Damon change and fall in love with her??

Damn, you're killing me, dear author!!! 😳☠️ I'm really scared and shaken what's about to happen... Jade wasn't Jade and Nancy is also after Damon?? Is she also a Vixen of Lucien? You're twists are unpredictable and unforeseeable, goddess help me.

Tallia Alapati

Damon is annoying but so far, I'm liking it.

WOW!!! Just WOW!!! You described their first time so perfectly. Thank you so much!!! I love stories where I can feel when it gets hot, when I also feel this knot in my stomach... just amazing... 🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️

Cristina Mattera

i agree. he is an ass.

Shuru

I grabbed the 1st thing I see,"a black pen" 🤣🤣 seriously? 😂😂

Jody Carroll

Very nice work

Holy moly, the third chapter is amazing... I laughed so hard... dang!!! She's screwed anyway... hahaha... LOL... 🤣🤣🤣

This chapter was heart wrenching... 💔💔💔 I'm soooo sad. She shouldn't have died. But it seems the victim turned into the assaulter. I hope they catch her fast and make her regret!!! Didn't saw this twist coming though...

XxYoomfie LuvrxX

bruh I was rlly expecting him to be face down ass up getting pegged by her HE PLAYED MEEEE

Ofa Leka

I like having Damon’s perspective. Thanks for this chapter.

Terri

I'm crying now at him seeing his mom in the kitchen, I'd love if that could happen for me.

dr.penguin

damon is a little weird 🤣

between Operation Movie Night and I Love You, they went from walking around the mall to the bedroom with no transition.

440

Omg I so cried over the loss of Loren. I really liked her character and am sad that she will no longer be in the book. But so far I love your book its very well written, good job. I cant wait to read the rest !!!!

Joe O'Neal

Really enjoying your work, I just hope Jasmine doesn't let her "mate" talk down to her ever again

Scot MacGregor

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OMFG!!! Did he bit her in order to change her or is this bite a mate mark??? I'm confused...

Terri

4 words? I don't understand

Emma Booker

Don't know yet.

I'm soo sad, dear author. I'm crying... 😭😭😭 why is this so sad? why can't she just give in? I understand where she's coming from but so many things changed. Will they really not get back together??? My heart is breaking right now 💔💔💔

wh0.Ash1

I think she should’ve put a wig on before she went out like come on now you can’t have people know what you look like

Minnie Mouse

Omg this book is soo good!!!!!

GawviQ

whaaaaat???? 😱😱😱 I'm absolutely engrossed with this story. I can't put it down. thank you author for a very well written detailed story!!

just a magnificent story. applause. love it.

also sounds like they are switches, not dom/sub since they seem to enjoy both sides, dominating and submitting.

Jenny Best Camacho

so far, so good

Darcel Redman

amazing work of art thats what this book is i love it keep up the grat work will be reading your other books

Mel Zettee

😭😭😭😭Loren was my favorite.....why!?

Liz Mendez

ok so how much is each chapter worth?? 2,000 for 1 Chapter?? ridiculous

Suresh Suresh

hi

Thenightingale

Ooops I put this up on the wrong book. apologies. this book is complete so it will have no more updates, ignore my previous comment.

Stephanie Hedgcorth

chapter “saving him” isn’t loading

Karen Cool

I don't think she loves Lucien. I think she sees him as her savior for saving her. she had Stockholm synonym cuz of it. if anything Lucien forced his love onto her. When I comes to Damon he never pushed her to love him if anything he tried to push her away. they allowed the mate bond to get them closer and in away what they r going through now with the game is backfiring against Lucien because it's making them even stronger.

MD MUSKAN

hii

Eirini Zannetti

This book should be a movie!!! A trilogy even!!!!! It's awesome!!!

shannon p

So good,can't wait for book 2! I hope you get well soon!💕

Debbie Adams

another great chapter

Thenightingale

Hi everyone, updates will resume tomorrow, it's just been a little bit difficult for me these past few days💕✨

Amanda Caruana

I bloody LOVED this book!! can't wait for book 2!!

shannon p

Wow great twist!

Fixer

You should have made her more confident. because if he would have said that to me. I would have told him if I dicust you so much you can get your own dam coffee. I Quit and walked out. and on the way out called him and aragant jackass.

Victoria Brinson

she is probably the most difficult woman there is 😂

terri4388

love this book and so excited for book 2

Thenightingale

Exciting news!! "Seducing Lucien" has been released!!!! you can find it by clicking on my profile at the top of the blurb of this novel or by simply searching for it in the search bar 🌹❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

xaviera Ross

hopefully she can find a way to save them both but it seems like Landon may just die...😢

Thenightingale

happy new year!!! Wishing you an amazing and successful 2021!🌹❤️💕🌠🌠

shannon p

I do feel bad for Lucien,but I also am a big softie lol! He definitely made a lot of bad choices though and should have just left Jasmine alone especially if he didn't want to be obsessive or cruel like his father.

Debbie Adams

he still had choices to make and he chose wrong, he should have faced the truth where everyone could have helped him

Lauren Rendero

oye...a warning that this was turning into psychotic horror woulda been nice....

ABC

Dom Damon makes sense, he is an alpha! He let go of control so maybe it's time for Jasmine to do the same, she might like it 🤣🤣

Vineeta Gupta

not gonna lie, I think I may just like Landon's character a tad more than Loren's. but the next chapter is going to be bad either way

shannon p

I was super surprised that Loren is alive!

Vineeta Gupta

I really didn't see that one coming, Loren being alive, her death just sounded so real. I'm curious to know who's body they actually buried and if it will become an important little detail, as you seem to tie things together at various points in the book.

DarkValkryie0415

I love Jasmon. They're so so cute and remind me (slightly) of my own relationship

Vineeta Gupta

I do think that Jasmine loves Lucien, but not in a romantic way, the way she loves Damon. there are many forms of love and I think she does love him, he was the 1st person to show her love and compassion post her family's death. And that's what's probably kept her from killing him. I just think that Lucien misinterpreted Jasmines love to be the romantic kind, which it wasn't. Your story is really interesting! I'm really loving it 😊

Thenightingale

....so those asterisks in the chapter "fear" are supposed to make the words bold. I have no clue why they are not bold...

Debbie Boston

oh boy here it comes....

Reader-891000

loved this story! thought you did a great job with the surprises and storyline. thank you so much!

Kayla Swick

amazing as always! I cant wait for jasmine's answer. I wouldn't mind a few little Damon's or Jasmine's running around. I bet they'd make some cute babies lol. good luck on your exams! mine are coming up thursday. FUN! lol

XxKarnaxX

Damnit the cliffhangers that might not even be cliffhangers make me need to read the next chapter but I'm trying so hard not but look at me going to the next....

Justmee

Well, I usually never make it pass the first chapter. Its very hard to find good writers on here. I must say I'm impressed. Chapter 2 here I come.

Justmee

I really enjoyed Damien P.O.V.!!! Great chapter. Hopefully they're more from his side of the story. I really want to like him 😅😂🤷🏽‍♀️

Khandie Colberg

still doing what you do best, keeping us begging for more of your story❣

Thenightingale

IMPORTANT!! hi everyone! I hope you are all well! as I said in the comments section of my other novel, I am unwell... it turns out I am very unwell and as such I will be delaying the release of my new book to perhaps this weekend. I will give you more information as the week progresses. stay safe! stay healthy! sending you all my love❤️🌹

Esessanee Wallace Moten

in the beginning it was wonderful but now it's just to much and its getting rather boring it seems as if it's never gonna get to where they fight together and not apart just too much

shannon p

Noooo! Ugh so sad!!!😭

Thenightingale

hello everyone, no update tonight since I'm working on the final chapters of the novel. Sending you all my love, and apologies for any inconvenience! will begin updating tomorrow again and then I will explain how I will go about releasing the final chapter!

Lacy

How old are Damon and Jasmine? I can't remember if it was mentioned before and I forgot or if it wasn't ever really said. Just curious! Also great chapter! It was easier to take than I expected, but I'm sure you are building up momentum until it really hurts 😭 I might need therapy when this is over 😂

MiLENA J

how many more chapters are there to go? I can't take the stress want to read them all together when it's completed!

Kayla Swick

also, sorry for a second comment on the same chapter, but I was wondering if you have any socials I can follow you on. I didnt see you mention anything so I figured I'd ask!

loyvlty

i've read a few chapters and now since the new update they all closed again and i need to sign in to continue what is this.... 🤦🏾‍♀️