Alpha Twins' Mate's broken Human Kommentarer
Cheryl A Bartlett
You're jumping back and forth in between the chapters. first it's lunch then it's bedtime? then it's Friday and then it's Thursday? make up your mind.
02/19/2026 05:27
Visitor
the first jayden section should be at the beginning of the chapter since it is part of the end of the previous chapter.
02/19/2026 01:26Cheryl A Bartlett
3 tops plus 3 pairs of pants = 9 combinations not 6.
02/18/2026 21:48Rose M Smith
Good story so far
02/18/2026 03:13Visitor
its pretty good so far!
02/18/2026 02:49Cheryl A Bartlett
you end a chapter in the middle of a sentence and start the next Chapter with the end of the sentence ? also too much repetition with each character repeating the same thing in their own words.
02/18/2026 02:40Visitor
enjoying book so far.
02/16/2026 19:43Visitor
can you correct a word? predigest should be prejudice. thank you.
02/16/2026 19:02Visitor
good book so far
02/16/2026 11:03Visitor
so far so good
02/16/2026 05:55Sarah Ruth Loveless White
I have to wonder how the alpha in this book has not seen what has been going on or how long it's been going on for. I hope not only that what is happening gets changed but if the twins like is implied with the title are her mates is that she rejects them.
02/16/2026 02:12Visitor
l like this book the girl is so strong and true to the ones she cares for but I hate what she is going through and in the end those that deserve and answers for what they done Exactly the luna.
02/14/2026 09:05Visitor
I am enjoying the book as well. when will there be an update??
02/13/2026 00:47Visitor
enjoying
02/12/2026 16:34Visitor
Good
02/12/2026 13:58Stacey Schaaf
The book keeps saying updated but nothing shows up? Please update the book is really good and I’m hooked!
02/10/2026 18:25Visitor
it’s a really good book
02/09/2026 14:05Visitor
good book
02/04/2026 05:35Visitor
so far so good. Love it
02/03/2026 17:49Visitor
could use better writting
02/03/2026 10:58Visitor
Great book
02/03/2026 06:29Visitor
alpha command should not work on a human...
02/02/2026 02:11Visitor
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01/26/2026 17:05Clare Hodgson
really enjoying the book so far, can't wait for more updates.
12/15/2025 15:49
Michelle Murphy
loving the story. Hopefully an update soon
10/21/2025 10:49
