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Alpha Twins' Mate's broken Human Kommentarer

Visitor
I like it. I don't understand how the Alpha doesn't realize his Luna is such a witch!! He should be able to feel her anger!
05/26/2026 06:23
Visitor
really enjoyed reading this new book I just wish that the chapters were longer x
05/14/2026 13:04
Visitor
its good to sit down or clean up and listen to
05/10/2026 21:01
dragonsbain22
Hello, dear readers. I just want to say thank you all for showing all the support for my stories. I haven't been able to read all the comments that I would like to. Maybe when I fully retire, I can read them all. But I do want to say that, yes, I have the same name for two different characters. I really didn't mean for it to happen that way, but just like in real life, there are several people out there with the same names. I did not mean to be confusing for anybody. Thank you again for your support and for reading. T. Bain.
05/08/2026 21:21
Visitor
loving the story so far hopefully it’ll be soon for a update
04/25/2026 12:26
Visitor
loving the story it's so well thought out it's relatable at least the main character being realistic anyway
04/17/2026 05:18
Lucille Ball
how often are the updates they don't seem as frequent as they used to be. nor is there author note
04/15/2026 16:23
Visitor
It is sad how in reality it is allows the weak that get bullied and no one takes a stance for them. I hope all of them get what they deserve. Hope the Luna gets severely punished.
04/13/2026 18:52
Bezoeker
like it
04/11/2026 06:28
Visitor
wasn’t Randy involved in some of the old Luna’s schemes?
04/09/2026 21:15
Visitor
getting old with the drug stuff. they can easily find out who is pushing the stuff by getting the alpha to Alpha command Simon and the exes and see who is selling this stuff but instead they him haul around until somebody ends up hurt
04/09/2026 20:53
Visitor
Really enjoying the book. have a few suggestions concerning the time loops and jumps. If one of them is telling the story can we continue with them because when it gets split up and hard to follow and when back to another one who was tied into what they had to say a small glimpse of it resurfacing and then into what needs to happen next? it gets really hard to follow sometimes and then sometimes the word itself isn't finished either.
04/07/2026 15:57
Visitor
Węgry good
04/06/2026 20:09
Brandy Champion
So far the story line it good.
04/06/2026 14:22
RoShannon Dean
what are the normal schedule for updates
04/03/2026 00:40
Ariel Hefflinger
sad but good book. great work on making it come to life in the head.
04/01/2026 16:36
Visitor
I'm loving all the plot twists and I hope the Luna and her brother gets what they deserve
03/31/2026 17:30
Visitor
The boys need to sit her down and explain to her that as their mate she will be the new Luna and she can put a stop to all the bullying and mistreatment of the lower people and their mother can’t do anything about it
03/28/2026 19:34
Visitor
if they are smart, they will tell the Alpha and the rest of the ranked wolves what’s going on so when they go to the clearing to catch Roland, the alpha can go with them and he can compel his members
03/25/2026 19:43
Visitor
I don’t understand if they wanna know what these people are on and who gave it to him. Why don’t they just Alpha Command them, then they would know what stuff is being passed around the Pack
03/23/2026 16:18
Visitor
Great story but needs more attention to formatting.
03/23/2026 08:04
Visitor
they need to go tell their dad what’s going on and then their dad as the alpha can bring these guys in and Alpha command them to tell them what they are taking and where they are getting it before somebody gets really hurt or raped
03/22/2026 19:56
Visitor
so far I it is a good book
03/21/2026 00:41
Visitor
ready for the next update story is great so far keep it up
03/20/2026 09:28
Visitor
I think they should have to stay in the cells and get the silver whip for every scar she has. They’re not gonna learn anything just by staying in sales and looking at pictures if she comes out of the coma they’re not gonna get any silver whip and I think the Luna needs to get the same thing they get if they get the silver whip for Luna gets the silver whip
03/20/2026 00:56
Visitor
part of this is missing
03/19/2026 14:01
Visitor
so dar good read! but ending a chapter mid sentence is very irritating.
03/16/2026 17:12
Visitor
great book so far
03/15/2026 23:51
Adrienne Krueger
So I'm having issues with sections being separated, like being in the middle of a sentence and switching to another POV at the end said POV it finishes the previous one. Also some of the chronology is out if order and is bothering me.
03/15/2026 21:29
Visitor
love the story so far. Very intriguing. Like the dynamic.
03/15/2026 13:51
Visitor
👍
03/15/2026 04:03
Visitor
I love the book so far can't wait to see what happens
03/15/2026 01:11
Visitor
just came across this book it looks good and the 1st chaper seems ok so gonna keep reading
03/14/2026 22:51
Visitor
you seem to have started the chapter in the middle of a sentence!
03/14/2026 10:57
Konstanze Zeigler
loving this story can't wait to see what happens next
03/13/2026 04:10
Visitor
you really need to go through the entire book and change the chapter endings. some finish mid sentence or mid conversation. they should really finish one scene then chapter, then the next scene.
03/12/2026 11:25
Visitor
at what point are they thinking of including the actual alpha of he pack in on their now quite serious investigations? or even the council now that they have evidence something serious happened elsewhere as well
03/12/2026 09:48
Visitor
The storyline is great however, you end the chapters in the middle of a sentence so it can get a bit confusing. You need to learn how to properly end a chapter.
03/11/2026 15:16
Danielle Grider
it's a good story but I do agree on finishing the sentence within the middle isn't okay. I would say last finish the sentence then start the next chapter
03/10/2026 13:23
Visitor
I love this book, it has a lot of drama. I can't wait to read what happens next!!!!
03/10/2026 02:28
Visitor
where is the rest? when will be the next update?
03/09/2026 23:43
Visitor
so far I like the book. Just don't like i have to go thru so much just to read. but I like to story
03/08/2026 18:12
Stephanie Pitts
Great book! Can't wait to see what happens here next.
03/07/2026 13:58
Visitor
just love where this book was going. keep up the good work
03/07/2026 09:56
Visitor
it’s a great book, I really like it a lot
03/07/2026 08:22
Amanda Daberkow
nice start let's hope they can continue without it falling flat
03/06/2026 23:43
Visitor
love this so far! makes me want to keep reading
03/06/2026 19:19
Jen Hill
the alpha's mate is a broken human is a great book
03/06/2026 04:43
Visitor
I'm love it so far
03/06/2026 01:46
Visitor
love the story so far, can not wait to see where it goes!!
03/05/2026 23:07
Visitor
love the alpha twins book it keeps you on your toes and wa time more
03/04/2026 04:18
Virginia Howard
good book so far
03/02/2026 11:56
Visitor
loving this book!!! its super good
03/02/2026 05:52
Visitor
love the story so far can't wait to keep reading the next chapter
02/28/2026 11:16
Jessica D Griffin
I like the book so far
02/28/2026 09:48
Mariah H
Sorry I have to remove this from my library. I'm to confused on who is actually supposed to be saying what. Seems like it would be a good book, though.
02/28/2026 01:45
Randall Bell Jr
good book I'm am really enjoying it so far
02/27/2026 07:47
Visitor
this is really good and I hope the bad wolfes learned a lesson
02/25/2026 03:18
Visitor
enjoying so far
02/24/2026 23:55
Visitor
love the story but the word is prejudice not predigest
02/24/2026 00:53
Visitor
payed to much for this already!
02/23/2026 18:58
Visitor
this story has been good so far, some of the chapters are in different orders but it's not that hard to follow
02/23/2026 16:30
Visitor
So far this book has been interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
02/23/2026 01:33
Visitor
❤️
02/22/2026 21:12
Visitor
I am definitely loving this book so far. Totally hooked
02/21/2026 07:22
Visitor
so far it's been a good book kind of keeping you hooked
02/20/2026 16:24
Visitor
I am enjoying this book. I hope the twins change their way of thinking.
02/20/2026 04:49
Lynn
the story is good however a lot of it is redundant
02/20/2026 04:30
Visitor
Pretty good so far.
02/19/2026 22:36
Cheryl A Bartlett
You're jumping back and forth in between the chapters. first it's lunch then it's bedtime? then it's Friday and then it's Thursday? make up your mind.
02/19/2026 05:27
Visitor
the first jayden section should be at the beginning of the chapter since it is part of the end of the previous chapter.
02/19/2026 01:26
Cheryl A Bartlett
3 tops plus 3 pairs of pants = 9 combinations not 6.
02/18/2026 21:48
Rose M Smith
Good story so far
02/18/2026 03:13
Visitor
its pretty good so far!
02/18/2026 02:49
Cheryl A Bartlett
you end a chapter in the middle of a sentence and start the next Chapter with the end of the sentence ? also too much repetition with each character repeating the same thing in their own words.
02/18/2026 02:40
Visitor
enjoying book so far.
02/16/2026 19:43
Visitor
can you correct a word? predigest should be prejudice. thank you.
02/16/2026 19:02
Visitor
good book so far
02/16/2026 11:03
Visitor
so far so good
02/16/2026 05:55
Sarah Ruth Loveless White
I have to wonder how the alpha in this book has not seen what has been going on or how long it's been going on for. I hope not only that what is happening gets changed but if the twins like is implied with the title are her mates is that she rejects them.
02/16/2026 02:12
Visitor
l like this book the girl is so strong and true to the ones she cares for but I hate what she is going through and in the end those that deserve and answers for what they done Exactly the luna.
02/14/2026 09:05
Visitor
I am enjoying the book as well. when will there be an update??
02/13/2026 00:47
Visitor
enjoying
02/12/2026 16:34
Visitor
Good
02/12/2026 13:58
Stacey Schaaf
The book keeps saying updated but nothing shows up? Please update the book is really good and I’m hooked!
02/10/2026 18:25
Visitor
it’s a really good book
02/09/2026 14:05
Visitor
good book
02/04/2026 05:35
Visitor
so far so good. Love it
02/03/2026 17:49
Visitor
could use better writting
02/03/2026 10:58
Visitor
Great book
02/03/2026 06:29
Visitor
alpha command should not work on a human...
02/02/2026 02:11
Visitor
............
01/26/2026 17:05
Clare Hodgson
really enjoying the book so far, can't wait for more updates.
12/15/2025 15:49
Michelle Murphy
loving the story. Hopefully an update soon
10/21/2025 10:49