Competition Heats Up
"Let's just say," Maddie replied, her voice a low hum, "that the Mongols' arrival has disrupted the delicate ecosystem I've so carefully cultivated." She gestured with her glass, the ice clinking like distant chimes. "Their methods are… unsubtle. They attract attention, the kind this town can't afford."
"And your methods are subtle, I assume?" I took a slow sip of the whiskey. It burned, but it was a clean burn, a welcome contrast to the lukewarm coffee.
"They are precise," Maddie corrected, her gaze sharp. "And they ensure that Calico remains… manageable. The Mongols are an infestation, and I am the exterminator."
"And you think Vance's missing geologist is just collateral damage in your pest control operation?" I asked, the whiskey warming my gut.
"Thomas Vance was a variable," Maddie stated, her voice devoid of emotion. "And variables must be controlled or eliminated."
"So, you're saying Vance's brother was a problem for you," I stated, the whiskey tasting suddenly bitter. "And the Mongols took care of him?"
Maddie's gaze remained steady, a cold, unwavering blue. "The Mongols are a blunt instrument, Mr. Draven. They solve problems by removing them. Whether Thomas Vance was a problem for them, or for someone else, is what we need to determine." She paused, her eyes flicking towards the bar's entrance, where a figure stood silhouetted against the harsh desert sun. "And it seems our conversation has attracted some unwanted attention."
My eyes followed hers to the doorway. A hulking shape detached itself from the glare, a silhouette in a dusty cowboy hat, blocking the light and casting a long, ominous shadow across the saloon floor. He moved with a practiced, predatory stillness, his gaze sweeping across the room, finally landing on Maddie and me. The man was a wall of muscle, his face obscured by the brim of his hat, but the air around him thrummed with a coiled violence.
"You two," his voice was a low rumble, like distant thunder, "are attracting too much attention." He took a step forward, his boots crunching on the dusty floor. Maddie didn't flinch, her blue eyes meeting his with a chilling calm. "And you are?" she asked, her voice steady, a silk thread against his granite.
"Just a concerned citizen," the man growled, his eyes narrowing on Maddie. "This town has enough problems without outsiders stirring up trouble."
"And yet, here you are," Maddie replied, her voice laced with a silken challenge. "Perhaps you're here to offer your… assistance?" The man took another step, his posture radiating menace.
"I'm here to make sure you both understand the rules," the man stated, his voice a low growl that vibrated in the stale air. "And you're breaking them." Maddie met his gaze, unblinking, her own response sharp and clear. "The only rule here, friend, is that I make the rules."
The man's jaw tightened, a muscle ticking beneath the weathered skin. He took another step, his shadow engulfing the table.
"That attitude won't serve you well in Calico, sweetheart," he rasped, his gaze shifting to me, a silent question in his eyes.
"She's right," I said, my voice low and steady as I pushed the whiskey glass away. "And you're overstepping." I cracked my neck. "You see, son, I have dealt with far worse than you. When your 'concern' meddles in the wrong affairs, one of two things happens. Either I put you in prison or I put you in the ground. So I suggest that you go take up your concerns with my buddy, the sheriff," I said.
The man's eyes narrowed to slits, his hand inching towards his hip. Maddie, however, remained unruffled, a faint smile playing on her lips as she watched the unfolding drama.
"You know," Maddie began, her voice a soft counterpoint to the building tension, "he has a point. This town operates on a different set of rules, Mr...?"
The man's gaze snapped to her. "Graves. Mr. Graves."
"Mr. Graves," Maddie continued, her smile widening. "And Mr. Draven, here, is simply not accustomed to our local customs."
Graves sneered, his gaze flicking between us. "Maybe I should give you a demonstration."
"I'd be careful if I were you," I drawled, pushing away from the bar. "This town's got a way of making people disappear. I wouldn't want you to become another one of its ghost stories."
Graves's eyes narrowed further, his hand hovering over his hip. "You think you can scare me, detective?"
"I think you're a fool playing with fire," Maddie interjected, her voice dangerously smooth. "And I'm the one who sets the blaze."
Graves's hand twitched, but before he could move, a sharp, clear voice cut through the saloon's tension.
"Gentlemen," a new voice chimed, cutting through the rising aggression. "Perhaps we can discuss this more… productively. Over coffee, perhaps?"
The voice belonged to a man emerging from the saloon's deepest shadows, a man impeccably dressed in a suit that looked out of place amidst the dust and decay. He moved with an unnerving grace, his eyes, calm and measured, taking in the scene with an almost detached curiosity, a stark contrast to Graves's simmering aggression.
"I believe Mr. Draven and Ms. Hicks have matters to discuss," the impeccably dressed man said, his voice a smooth, disarming balm. "Perhaps Graves here could attend to some… other business." Graves, after a glare that could curdle milk, grunted and melted back into the shadows from which he'd emerged. The suited man offered a small, almost imperceptible nod to Maddie, then turned his attention to me, extending a hand. "Mr. Draven, a pleasure. I'm Sterling. I represent certain parties who are very interested in seeing this town cleaned up." Sterling's handshake was firm, dry, and cool, a stark contrast to the oppressive desert heat clinging to my skin. His eyes, a pale, unreadable blue, held a glint of something I couldn't quite place – a calculated neutrality that felt more dangerous than Graves's overt menace. This whole town was a nest of vipers, and Sterling, with his polished veneer, was just another snake in the grass, his offer of help a silken noose.












































