Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) टिप्पणियाँ
Rosabella G
Have not finished yet but so far very good. I enjoy the different species unlike other werewolf mate stories where they all become so familiar with each and it feels like you're reading a repeat. The characters are enjoyable, there are parts that make me feel the emotions the characters feel. I'm able to immerse myself into the "pages". Good job!
09/04/2023 07:14
Ainoa Rodríguez Dopazo
I like how she channels that anger into something productive. Good for her.
09/04/2023 07:14
Robin Igbo
I’m loving this book
09/04/2023 07:14
SweetLemonTealol
Love the story!
09/04/2023 07:14Ainoa Rodríguez Dopazo
This has started really good. Keep it up!
09/04/2023 07:14Victoria Sinning
good story so far, but the writing is messy...
09/04/2023 07:14
angela tom
Almost halfway through the book, and I can say that it’s quite a read, especially if you’re into supernatural books. Definitely excited to read the rest of the book.
09/04/2023 07:14Weir__baconnn
I love it so far. I think it’s a unique story and thanks for sending me the prologue!
09/04/2023 07:14
Esther Theko
wow I love it!!!
09/04/2023 07:14
Madhvi Yadav
amazing 😍😍
09/04/2023 07:14Monse Cristobal
it'really amazing this story!
09/04/2023 07:14
heleina daus
oh my godddf
09/04/2023 07:14
nami_JK7
Hey.. I really love your book.. Actually you already recommended it to me.. But something came out so I can't read it as soon as you gave me the link...But now I read it Well good job You're a great writer. Keep going!! Fighting!!!
09/04/2023 07:14
Purvi Agarwal
This is amazing!!
09/04/2023 07:14Abby Wise
I loved it......and I will re-read this often
09/04/2023 07:14Ibinabo Brown
ouuuu I can't wait to start reading , I already know I'm gonna love it
09/04/2023 07:14EIKYL
As I prdicted, your story is amazing as you. thank you for letting me read such a masterpiece
09/04/2023 07:14
Iuliana BOZKURT
The plot is quite ok and the author has some potential, BUT the passage from one narrative block to the other is so abrupt, that you no longer understand anything. The events go into a certain direction, then we are taken back in time, then we return to the present moment... the transition is not smooth and we keep wondering what point in the story we are at. So, the writing technique is still poor. But hey, feedback helps one improve, right?
09/04/2023 07:14
Stacey Gough
wow, can't wait for you to finish this story ...
09/04/2023 07:14Johanna Tobias
The idiot is Damn Bipolar. Can't make up his own mind. Makes me want to punch him so bad! The story content is really good though, makes you easily transfixed. 😍👌
09/04/2023 07:14
Just K80
This book is incredibly well written. Everything has been thought through and has me hooked on what will happen next! I love the way it has more characters (faeries, trolls...) and isn't focused on one supernatural being like most books. I can't wait to continue my journey through the protagonists eyes- great job!
09/04/2023 07:14Hisir Dhan
This book is amazing!!! I don't know what I'll do when it's over.... Probably cry
09/04/2023 07:14Crisanto Dela peña
Wow this book is literally truly amazing I'm amazed and I really appreciate the content of this book I hope theres a part two🥰🥰
09/04/2023 07:14Meriki Atyurs
i love this story
09/04/2023 07:14Bree
I just started reading this and it is such a good read! 💜
09/04/2023 07:14Anaëlle Wallaert
The writer asked me if i couls read this story. I did and I have to tell this story is amazing and captivating !! It's well written and being french I managed to read it quite well. I don't regret and I recommend it ! Sorry if I made a mistake. I'm french so my english isn't perfect.
09/04/2023 07:14never knew
how can I delete my account? pllsss helpppp
09/04/2023 07:14
Rupal Khandelwal
well written book, liked the characters but feel like the plot is quite rough and need more smoothing.
09/04/2023 07:14Alwina Lopez
Thanks for letting me inside Kane's world! Wishing this story all the best ❤️
09/04/2023 07:14Elly
I actually enjoyed this story. I read non stop and finished like in 2-3 hours which means Is really addicting lol you just wanna keep reading more and more!! This story was written good I liked it !! can’t wait for next chapters on book 2 !!
09/04/2023 07:14
Keralight
Love your story so much
09/04/2023 07:14HNC Krstl
It's beautiful~ I really like how strong and determined Ember is. Thank you for creating characters like Aster, Ian and Jett. ❤ I loved reading their parts the most.
09/04/2023 07:14Keralight
Love the story 💕💕
09/04/2023 07:14
Coolchick57
nooo
09/04/2023 07:13
✨🦋Åbšøłüté•Qûëėń🦋✨
love how he set her up and didn’t she didn’t even realize🤦🏻♀️😂
09/04/2023 07:13lunar kiss
nooooo ember can’t leave pleaseeee😭😭😭😭😭
09/04/2023 07:13
Uileumdaum
This is an amazing book and I'm glad author recommended it🤗
09/04/2023 07:13Iatha Flemmings
wow love this book
09/04/2023 07:13
yorkbekkahk18
loving this book so far.
09/04/2023 07:13Ggukie✨🦋
is it me or Kane is a little bit jealous about her talking to other man? hahaha he doesn't want her huh
09/04/2023 07:13
lene weyers
This book is AMAZING. the writer reached out to me on WP and I can honestly say that I don’t regret reading this at all.
09/04/2023 07:13Jasmine Kabir
amazingggg
09/04/2023 07:13Carllan Keisha Cabigting
Actually someone chatted me about this book idk if it's the writer but he or she send a few chaps and tomorrow I'll start reading this book
09/04/2023 07:13Talisha Pieters
I love it, a few chapters in and I feel like I've known the main character for years. This book is right up my alley in terms of writing and setting.
09/04/2023 07:13
cutiebun
love this story a lot 😊❤
09/04/2023 07:13Aqua Dolphin
I love it so far!!!
09/04/2023 07:13Brenda Faye Carter
I see what happened to Ian and all I say is dirtedpoo. not happy, but will still read on
09/04/2023 07:13Nicole Lionel Thomas
Amazing book. Definitely worth it. It will keep you engaged and wanting to read more. Keep up the good work. 💯
09/04/2023 07:13
Irene Igharas
This one is something new i can sit and read with a hot coffee ☕
09/04/2023 07:13
Joleen Akrofi
Lovely book. A very intriguing storyline😊😊😊
09/04/2023 07:13lunar kiss
was ian working with kane? is that why he called kane in the troll fight? maybe thats why kane didn’t bother about ian and ember relationship...🤔
09/04/2023 07:13Laura Garib
now getting into the story liking it so far
09/04/2023 07:13
CraziestDiva
wow this is amazing❤😻
09/04/2023 07:13
bellas7493
i love it
09/04/2023 07:13ishveen kaur
i love ittt 😍😍😍
09/04/2023 07:12
amtul fatah maliha
nice
09/04/2023 07:12Veronica Wilson
What I havs read so far is great
09/04/2023 07:12
Nae Nae
dang why he do her like that
09/04/2023 07:12Shayla T
I honestly love this book 😍
09/04/2023 07:12Yeyelove Peter
can I just say that Kane is confused
09/04/2023 07:12
Oblomovissad
The stream of consciousness is fascinating. 💥💥💥🤍✨
09/04/2023 07:12Yeyelove Peter
dude please decide whether she's yours or not and stop torturing her 😤😡
09/04/2023 07:12Oblomovissad
I loved fiction. Immersive... The stream of consciousness is fascinating.💥💥💥
09/04/2023 07:12
Emma Higgins
I found out about this book from the editor on wp and I’m so glad I said yes to sampling chapters, I’m honestly really enjoying it.
09/04/2023 07:12lunar kiss
i want to sleep but I can’t stop reading it!!!!
09/04/2023 07:12Yeyelove Peter
magnificent plot and setting
09/04/2023 07:12Ishi Ishon
Dwl. This is really good. Continue the good work. Make people smile always. Nice one.👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 07:12lunar kiss
my feeling are torn. part of me started liking kane when he said ember was his, but the other part loves ember for stepping up for herself but ... ugh idk but im loving this story
09/04/2023 07:12Yeyelove Peter
l'm already in love with the characters😍
09/04/2023 07:12Ishi Ishon
Singing:- God made you special.
09/04/2023 07:12Yeyelove Peter
the prologue is rather captivating and the way you began not many have the ideas to start but I really impressed you're even better than me when it comes to writing what I'm trying to say to say is that the fact you can print the idea from your mind is really excellent
09/04/2023 07:12Meril Shibu
this is the coolest story *ever*... with all my fav supernaturals..firstly i thought it's going to be like all the cliche warewolf stories..but guess what, the story was completely flawless as well as captivating, and i was like finish reading it within half a day.. i am so thankful for the recommendation. i might have missed a cool book...
09/04/2023 07:12
triumphy
I love this book
09/04/2023 07:12Ishi Ishon
☺
09/04/2023 07:12Ishi Ishon
Oh Lord
09/04/2023 07:12Ishi Ishon
MINE
09/04/2023 07:12Ishi Ishon
lol
09/04/2023 07:12
sosweet2003
thank you so much. I'm going to read your story now.❤
09/04/2023 07:12Ishi Ishon
Take my breath away
09/04/2023 07:12Teeigh
I'm writing an important exam tomorrow. One that will determine my future but yet here I am, getting addicted to this story. I'm doomed!
09/04/2023 07:12Ishi Ishon
dang he's strong
09/04/2023 07:12Yến Trang
Actually, there are still errors, if you can recover it, it will be great
09/04/2023 07:12Petro De Goede
srill a cool story
09/04/2023 07:12
Reader-662065
great!! I would have just liked more get back at her mother and at the pack as a whole - more apologies&explanations for knowing she was being bullied and doing nothing, and more of her showing them she was nothing like what her mother had told them. anyway, a good one!
09/04/2023 07:12Faria D.
🤣 Ian!!! your gonna set her up like that?!?! but like, the troll isn’t half bad, in my opinion
09/04/2023 07:12nrshpkaa
thankyou author for recommend this storyy coz it's really entertaining and the story line is too nicee😍❤️
09/04/2023 07:12Nobody Special
waaaa i love it!!!
09/04/2023 07:12
Creator Phoenix
I like the characters and how they react towards each other but being a bit more readability or even a bit more Laughable scenes can go a long way love your stories ❤ 💙
09/04/2023 07:12Faria D.
Awesome so far!!! it’s funny, wonderfully written and so unexpected sometimes. I can’t help but want to finish it as soon as possible but also slowly enjoy it!
09/04/2023 07:12
Ebony Van Der Ryken
can’t wait to finish reading after being sent just a little I want to binge read it all
09/04/2023 07:12
mistyflower19
A writer recommended this story to me in WP and i never regret clicking on the link! how come this wasn't posted in WP😭
09/04/2023 07:12
Khadija Mohammad
love this book the writing is so professional and easy to read and really hooked me
09/04/2023 07:12Readjusts Crown
I don’t like Kane
09/04/2023 07:12Petro De Goede
i like the change
09/04/2023 07:12
Stephanie Laurence
hey! you sent me a part fo the story and i'm not really one who reads werewolf books but i read the chapters you sent me and it made me want to know more. Normally i expect ever werewolf book to have the same plot as i have seen on some websites, some even hav the same characters, attitude and settings, but yours has a unique plot and i'm very excited about it and thrilled to know more about the book...it's a story well done, keep it up.
09/04/2023 07:12Elena Stanciu
It's good. But you should specify a little about the time not every country starts school at the same time. And olso you should say about the weader and asociette it a little with the mood. You don't have to give to much details adout it specificaing the month. And to compare the weader whit the mood it would make the reader to feel more.
09/04/2023 07:12Traci Fox
love this
09/04/2023 07:12Brenda Faye Carter
Love this Book.
09/04/2023 07:12TESL1-0620 Enlyss Gimpuhut Itoh
I'm so in love with this book. Thank you so much for recomending it to me!
09/04/2023 07:12
Dona Jean Laranja
My geeee When the writer recommend this to me I got goosebumps reading part of the prolonged , and I know that I'll get hooked with this book this is so one of my genre ... I know I'll love it
09/04/2023 07:12
