Unhinged Commentaires

Sherisa Weston

I can see Osiris getting careless soon. Taking her out into town where her friends and family can find her, helping her train so she can get more powerful and not thinking that she could turn on you because he is very cocky. He even seemed afraid of her and did realize she was so powerful. He seemed to have underestimated how strong she was. Oh Osiris I can't wait until Kiya kills you

Glemmett Maylor

Good for you Neron! This is a proud moment.

Tosha Scott

Hope that whatever magic was used to turn Kiya dark can be reversed. I am still not sure how I feel about her and Neron together after all the craziness is over. Ariel definitely needs a new host and maybe that host will be Darien's new mate while his wolf gets his original mate. I am interested in what Diana the owl truly is since she has been lurking around both Kiya and Neron. I hope Kiya can connect with her child version of herself to heal and her wolf isn't gone forever.

Sniderin

Oooooooh. Things are heating up and getting dark!!! Very interested how things are resolved after this. Well, I'm hopeful for a resolution and reunion. Team Kiyron strong!!!

aww Mara l like her already

hmmmm not sure she’s going to make it back now 😞

Jonathan should be scared by now.

Reader-008277

In what chapter did Neron give Kiya the necklace?

Reader-012617

Omg I can’t take it! please feel better soon💚 The suspense is killing me....... love your story’s xx

"Never tell a woman to calm down!" 🤣 -Hell yeah! Okay, back to reading!

Moonlight Muse

love the chapter! as always was excited to see the update

Laura Kanten

love this book! can't wait for more chapters 🤓

Perla G.

☹😭😭😭😭🤗🤗

Meaghan Prue

marii i know this a very personal question and u dont have to answer obviously if u dont want fok i only wondered if the inspiration for this whole story was from personql experiences or something else

Jael Brown

I love Diana, I can't wait for her true identity to be revealed. Oynx has always been the voice of reason for Neron he was just hurt by the loss of his mom and sister to listen. His dad slowly descending down a slope of insanity didn't help either. Poor Darien, I can't blame him for his outburst. Odessa tore his heart out with her bear hands and decided to play hackeysack with it. Although the decision s she made were her own they were in direct correlation to Neron's actions. I am interested in seeing what happens to Odessa and how Neron handles this and all of the other situations that have arose in his pack

Berry Bear

ohh... looks like Adonis is going to be a big brother 😊 i love that two chapters Updates you are doing. keep your health first is the best you can do.

also... I hope Darien gets a second chance mate ... he so derserves one

Saki J. Gibson

Marii I am loving the turns the story is taking. Even though I hate Lady Sanguine, I understand her. I hate killing but I understand why (in the story). There are many complications to this journey for Kiya and you make them realistic. She experienced trauma and doesn’t have her mate to balance her. That’s why she’s going even deeper into “crazy land.” I think if her and Neron get together it will ease a lot of her pain.

Mia

im not liking this part at all..I am kind of frustrated that no one has found any trace/clues as to where Kiya is...Osiris...Just needs to go already

AstarteLor

Seriously, this is so amazing! Greedy for more!

WHEW! Letting 4 chapters accumulate was totally worth it! Thank you, Marii, for the amazing story, per usual :) No redemption for Odessa, and she even tried to snivel and beg in the end. What about those guards Kiya killed? They probably had mates and kids, who just lost their fathers. Does Kiya not realize that? She wants to preserve children’s innocence, but she’s unknowingly destroying it 😬😬😬 Can’t wait for Neron and Kiya to face off. That’s gonna be TENSE!

Reader-795611

Osiris is the worst kind of villain, using Kyia’s trauma to manipulate her and promising love and support when we really doesn’t care for HER. Just what she can do for him. Hoping his karma is swift!

Conny Marek

Please take your time to heal. Don't play with your health. I myself i'm in the Hospital right now cause of my Multiple sclerosis. I wish you all the best and can't wait to read what happens with Ariel. 😘

Yahaida Perez-Lemon

I love that she finally killed Odessa but it was kinda....underwhelming...hmmm....🤔 idk what I was expecting...I guess maybe I was waiting for Kiya to play with her a little bit before killing her lol

Kekedastarr

I love how the book starts off. very intense and it draws the audience into the book.

Renee Fogg

I love this series I can't put it down. I wish they made a movie or TV show out of this

Jessica Carr

Ohhhhh this is getting good!!!!!! I can’t wait

Robin Saum

I love the book. but is it ever going to be completed. when I purchased the book, it looked to be almost complete. but it is not. it has been over 4 months! do not get books from this author that are not complete. unless you have half a year to read one book!

Catriese Henning

I think Diana is the spirit of Neron's sister.

Rashelle Grace Aukema

when will he learn that the bird is the KEY!!!!

Alyssa

The only person who would have loved Neron unconditionally was his mate. That Odessa only loved his title and the father is a monster!!! I’m shaking my head. That Jonathan really is pure evil.

G.A Coppola

If Neron survives, and if Kiya prevails against LS, where will they go from there? kiya brings up in this chapter if she could still be considered good after all this. I don’t think so. I appreciate the straying from the norm here, but I think neron killing his dad and everything LS did went too far. I don’t see how they can make it back from this realistically, and I was holding out hope that they would find their way back together, but I don’t think that will be possible now in a way that’s believable.

Baby Angel

why can’t I read chapter 45??

Taina Iosefo

Wow.... it’s getting more and more intense.. so excited.. haha

Am I the only greedy reader checking and rechecking for one of those double update days she gives us sometimes? LOL.oh... it’s just me... 😂😂😂

Oh wow 😳😳😳😳 He is doing what Odessa did to Darien... Osiris will resurface that inner child! But why does Neron feel something weird on their mating bond?

Mrs.Hyde

I'm confused at times the actions perpetrated by Kiya.

Meaghan Prue

because of Easter will there be an update this weekend or no

Jemma

I need a chapter!! I am obsessed with this book. Kiya Diana Artemis Neron.. I need my fix 🤍🦉🐺 .. I wasn’t expecting him to kill his Dad although screaming at his dad to shut his trap the entire time 💆🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️ he was awful 😒 we’re really starting to see just how badly Neron’s head and self esteem is from his father just how badly the emotional abuse actually runs 😕 not that it is an excuse in any way for what he did there is no justification for abuse. but it is very sad Kiya Neron the dad was a very selfish horrible person he would of never changed but it doesn’t stop it from the fact it was still his dad 😢 Neron did fail Kiya yes but he did not fail his Dad his dad failed him!!! it is NOT the child’s responsibility for the parents actions! I do hope we get to see if the dad meets Selene or his wife and daughter I can’t think which will be more justified as to him not getting that chance/peace or actually hearing the truth/shame from them .. either way he was a bully and a vile coward. what Neron is doing now is what an Alpha is an alpha is not and never will be someone who bullies and leads with fear instead of respect, they own and take responsibility for there actions and have compassion and strength, and most of all PROTECT not control belittle and abuse.. his fathers view of what strength means is very wrong! definition of WEAK 😒 and alpha/Luna should be equals partnership not control and possession they respect and love there luna like any relationship should be not about power plays. they actually know there value 👊🏻 they would know there other half is there strength and vise versa.. we all know the luna’s are the heart of the pack there alpha needs them and man enough to know it 😉😬🐺 I don’t know what will happen with Kiya and Neron or if anything will for that matter but the most important lesson is exactly that point is that he’s doing this without expecting anything in return or to be with her 😶 I don’t know if that can happen but at least he is acknowledging and becoming a better person not just for her but himself. I hope Kiya can push through soon 😅 I’m glad she didn’t kill her sister apart from Neron she’s the only one who has genuinely learned anything and sorry. I hope we get to see more of Pheobe being Hekate’s avatar she’s got to be something special indeed I think there is a lot more held back in her 💜 being hekate’s avatar would she not maybe be able to have some sort of control over the dead rouges and even over cerebus 🤔 that would be interesting 💪🏻🧙🏻‍♀️🌕🌑🌕

Alyssa

I re-read chapter 79 of Untouchable. I have no sympathy for that Osirius. He kidnapped those avatars, locked them in cages and forcibly marked Kiya. He is no better than Jonathan and his old alpha. He is evil and he also needs to die

Tammi Schane

I love this story I need to know what’s happening I can’t wait for more chapters. when are there going to be more??

What does he mean by "disbanding"? He'll still be an Alpha but not everyone will be part of his pack?

Kirsten Burmeister

I am so happy to have been able to see their journey. sad the book is over but looking forward what you have in store for us :)

Will there be an update today

Moonlight Muse

omg omg LOVED IT!!! 😍😍

Jemma

I miss Artemis & Diana 🤍🐺🦉 I love Artemis so much she thought her way out of the cage and darkness and saved Kiya and Halima because she loves Kiya so much 😢🤍🤍🤍 ♾ and little Diana even got part of her Kiya back I think she makes me cry every time she’s with Kiya or Neron literally hugs them with her wings 🤧🤍 I was so angry when Osiris was about to kill hurt Diana he is evil what he’s done to Kiya manipulating her inner abused child is disgusting cowardly, he’s violated and used her he’s just the same as the Prince men if not worse! used Kiya to get what he wants .. as for Nerons dad Jonathan he is disspicable all of them Osiris Jonathan all the Prince men all vile the only man that has actually learned anything is Neron! Osiris is true predator praying on her inner child and her weaknesses/desires he is crazy if he thinks he’s any different to the Prince men he is evil using there abuse to his advantage to abuse her too for how own purpose

omg the suspense 😲

LaToya Grier

why did all my chapters lock back again? I went to go read the latest updated and I got an error and seen all my chapters relocked

Amber Mitchell

I want Neron and Kiya to be together so freaking bad...we shall see what happens with these last chapters!

Moonlight Muse

oooo exciting cant wait for the next chapter! hope kiya comes thru

Jemma

YES that chapter with Jonathan and his wife and daughter I had been waiting for that! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 I felt so sad for Nuria 😢 his wife was amazing though it probably broke her heart too ☹️ so glad she said about him using them to justify his abuse of Kiya and Neron that it was never about them just about himself 👌🏻👏🏻😠 he truly is something else, like the goddess said he will never be sorry how can he when he doesn’t think he’s wrong 😐😒 very sad. his children deserved better. I hope Selene let’s them both see Neron again but also I’d like Kiya to be there this time so she can hear from there lips it’s not and never was her fault! that would be nice. as for Odessa 🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️ both of them narcissists till the end blaming everyone but themselves. I hope the human they’ve bonded Ariel with is the witch that is Dariens second chance mate 🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻 Maybe Neron will be moving his pack closer to Kiya’s , working with garnett moon , even if they end up together or not I think they will be apart of eachothers lives and care deeply for eachother it’s certainly changed Neron for the better whatever happens. If they are not to be together I know Kiya chose not to have another mate so she would be with someone of choice no mate bond, but Neron would be able to have a second chance mate I assume? although that would be sad realistically that is a possibility as though Kiya cares for him a lot I think even loves him, she may not be able to love him in that way. 😕 … this series has been so amazing 🐺🦉🌕

Reader-857386

Diane still has a play in this too. Neron has redeemed himself in the eyes of Selene. His strength came from his deep love for Kiya. And I am still waiting for Darien to get his second chance.

Sherisa Weston

whoa what a chapter

yolanda peguero

I think Kiya has reach the point of of not return. I really like the story but she has become as much of a villain as the people who hurt her in the past. when she wakes up from her darkness it may be too late for regrets: even thought I understand her darkness still a lot to move on. I am team Kyron, but at this point their relationship which was none just hit the non return point. I had hopes for them but now. they are gone. too much pain, too much bloodshed. good story .

Satui Maui'a Laufau

Oh I think Diana is her best friend. I was thinking that it was the Moon Goddess but it fits more if it’s her best friend which is Neron’s sister; plus the Moon Goddess doesn’t need a disguise. anyhow, thank you so much Marii for this badass update! loved every bit of it.

Tracy Mauro

I'm definitely going to have to stop binge reading...I get so disappointed when I reach the end...lol

Saki J. Gibson

These books make me feel happy 😊 I’m loving it! I really do want Kiya and Neron to be happy and together. It shows you love conquers all ❤️

k@tie

I just binged Untouchable and now Unhinged up until the latest chapter, a few days ago. I’m beside myself anxiously waiting to read more, and I keep checking! When/how frequent is this book updated?

Ana Ramirez Boswell

I had bought all the chapters til the last update,now everything is gone and asking to buy the chapters all over again. Not cool

After these moments of healing and vindication,

Sonia McLeod

wow well if he won't kill his father I will it deserves it 😘😘🇬🇧

So... who is Diana, really? 🤔 who's that voice she heard? And yehey! Raina is pregnant!!!

Meowdel Em

okay this was a great chapter , I did not enjoy the previous chapter so much.

Brittney Allen

I kinda suspected that the moon goddess was thinking of sending nuria and celeste to talk to kiya but I didnt think she was going to resurrect them. Plot Twist! Awesome surprise! Gonna miss lil diana but we got Nuria back so that is a plus.

Amber Mitchell

How many chapters left? Will this next one be final update for book 2?

I love your books.

Moonlight Muse

marri i was wondering if you have a rough idea to how many chapters are left for this book?

Sherisa Weston

man the end of chapter 76 had me imagining those scenes hehehe. I really enjoy Kiya being on the dark side but it is also bittersweet for me. I find LS intriguing but I also miss Kiya and she belongs in the light not the darkness

Pupu

Marii will there be any romance in the book ? just team Neron and Kiya here :D

Kirsten Burmeister

oh wow, intense final battle chapters. I love the final neron bits ... bittersweet ..

Reader-670952

When will there be updates to unhinged ?

Jemma

need my fix 🙊🐺🦉🤍

reader2121

that cliffhanger tho! wow, amazing amazing chapters. well worth the wait!

A M Archibald

Blackhead on my face 😂 this made me pull a face and laugh.

wow this was a great chapters you are the best Mario and glad that your feeling better 💐💐💐

Doris Lopez

I love this story can't wait for the next chapter.

Glemmett Maylor

Well, I'm still holding faith in Kiya and her Garnet Moon family to find a way out of this. Love will prevail but I gotta say I'm loving Osiris's evil warped mind. dwl

Justmee

Definitely UNHINGED 🥴! I wonder does Osiris realize he just pushed an avatar more powerful than himself over the edge? This is merely temporary for Kiya. Unlike Osiris she has truly experienced love. It's about to GO DOWN 😫🤯! Awesome update 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

OMG! Every update brings tears. I'm not complaining, it's a powerful story that's beautifully written. Thank you.

Can't wait the new chapters...huge fan

Saki J. Gibson

I’m so conflicted. Kiya experienced hell because of Neron. Yes I know he was going through a lot when he was abusing her, he practically was being abused himself. I’m team Neron and I’m kind of ashamed to say it. The him now is amazing and trustworthy. Kiya has definitely made him into a man. I would really like to see them end up together but Kiya will have to heal a lot.

Reader-807209

does anyone know the writing schedule for this? becaaaauuusseeee I’m dying lol I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING ON IN THIS BOOK

Moonlight Muse

omg such good chapters! im glad i read the small disclaimer on insta about the last chapter or id be crying 🙈 amazing job marii!

can't wait for the next chapters love the book

RoyalGala

I can't wait to read about the ritual and how Kiya will survive! When will you release the next chapter?

Sherisa Weston

Neron won't die hehe. Kiya can heal him I believe

Jael Brown

Marii I am so glad you are feeling better and back to writing we missed it so much. I have one question though did Osiris ever sever his bond with Nadia and if so could her and Lucien be together?

Hope you are recovering well, dear author! Ignore all those naysayers out there demanding their 7,291 daily updates. They can bloody well wait while you get better 🙂

Jael Brown

I think this is a trap he is not going to let her go that easily. Someone has some prominent anger issues. How are you going to get mad at Kiya, Osiris for saying you are doing to her what Titan did to Amber when you are? I really hope Nadia and Lucien aren't dead, maybe they are hiding away from Osiris together. We will see how the story progresses. Thanks for the update Marii.

Mihaela Vardianu

I refuse to think that Kiya really torn to the bad side

Rhonda Starks

I hope that Selene would step up and don't let Kayia suffer from any longer. Take the bite mark off her neck. or give power to Neron so he could help Kyia and save the pack.

Angela Salcido

Mario Solaris, somebody made a comment implying that there will be 3 books in this series. is that true? if so, will it focus on Kiya and neron finally getting together?

Annabananaz

Absolutely, love your series, you books got me hooked, the waiting for more chapters is killing me lol. I binge read the first book in one night not realizing the second book is ongoing. The anticipation has me on the edge of my seat. Minor edit note on chap 32, "grow into the woman, she never got a chance to..." Just want to let you know, you rock, Marii, I like you don't let others hold you down, your love for writing reflects in each word and page. 😘❤️

Peggy Shrum

I'm excited for this story to finish

Jael Brown

I knew it was a trap, I am ready to find out what this ritual entails. I really hope Kiya is not harmed in anyway. Neron and Anthy where are you?

Elle 🧿

So many theories about who is Diana? She is mysterious that’s for sure. Is she Amber? Is she Neron’s little sister? Is she neither? Only time will tell, I can’t wait 😊. Another excellent chapter, thankyou Marii 😊.

Jessica Carr

I am so ready for her to be found and Osiris gets what is coming to him

Jamee Moore

You know this really makes the me think about the wolves of certain characters that don't even get to defend themselves. Like Ariel (Odessa's wolf) wanting to be with Darien, but can't do anything about it because Odessa is being selfish wanting Neron and Darien. Then we have Delilah (Ashley's wolf) who wanted to save Kiya and Artemis early on, but Ashley wouldn't let her. Now, I'm wondering what's going on with Johnathon's wolf and if he's just as evil as his human or if he wants something different.

OMGosh!! I’m in tears 😭

Meaghan Prue

please don’t let her family die and Abby she is a human what if she dies poor Jackie