Omega Bound Comentarios
Visitor
I absolutely am loving this book. the characters each have their own strengths and weaknesses and the plot is terrifyingly terrific
06/24/2025 17:30Visitor
this book has held my interest so far
06/23/2025 22:05Visitor
does thanr and alya have a hea
06/23/2025 20:39Veronica White
My second story updated uploaded incorrectly. I apologize for the confusion and I'm waiting on the company editor to delete it.
06/23/2025 05:54Veronica White
fun fact. I can write assholes in the comments, and it isn't flagged by the company for 'sensitive words' but I can't write s-t-u-p-i-d
06/22/2025 23:32Veronica White
Some thoughts going through the comments: 1. Thane does admit he is s-t-u-p-i-d for not seeing the clues about his tie to Ayla. 2. Thane's sister is DEAD not cw tv dead, where everyone on the show can come back alive several times, but...dead dead. I am exploring something along these lines as a plot twist...may be this book or my second or none at all...not sure yet. 3.I may have started to seggsy time between Thane and Ayla too early in the book, but apparently, I was in my horndog feelings early since it wasn't planned. Actually, very little of this book has been. 4. I'm not a writer. I'm pretending to be. ITS MY FIRST TIME WRITING ANYTHING SINCE 2003 and that was a college essay. Please, give me a break. THIS IS MY FIRST BOOK. My second is up and probably has issues. If I find out my favorite book on these platforms wasn't finished by the author (it was abandoned a long time ago. werewolf heartsong I think) due to assholes, I would totally understand now.
06/22/2025 23:31Joan Osaretin Dottie
This book has a suspenseful vibe to it and makes you want to keep reading. You just do not know what comes next.
06/22/2025 21:23Visitor
This book is wonderful! Great details and amazing story. You can really see it happening as you read.
06/22/2025 21:02Veronica White
When I tell you I panicked because I remembered Ayla's birthday is in June (17th) and I missed writing her birthday party........I had the whole chapter in my head and why it was a late party then I remembered it is winter in their world. Someone remind me later.
06/22/2025 20:54Visitor
wonderful wording and great flow. very intriguing
06/22/2025 13:40Visitor
starting off on a great foot. a lot of people don’t have the capacity to write like this!
06/22/2025 05:02Kitty Sedam
very good piece of art. keep up the good work.
06/22/2025 04:29Jordon Liebert
very good!!! edit as she tugs at my hair not are hair
06/20/2025 23:44
Amanda
this book is forsure a great read !! love the humor in this book and how it goes from hot a steamy to extremely funny to action. Great job !!!
06/20/2025 14:04
user2505274893
Is very intriguing and interesting too stop reading.
06/20/2025 04:01Visitor
just started this book an am enjoying it so far.
06/19/2025 21:13Visitor
so far so good
06/19/2025 03:37Caroline
loving this story can't wait to read more
06/18/2025 16:12Veronica White
I have now used translate to respond to comments in 9 different languages. TOO CRAZY! Never imagined....
06/17/2025 22:57Visitante
me encanta
06/17/2025 18:33Yahav Aripol
honestly such a good book, keeps you wanting more each chapter. love it
06/17/2025 10:47Visitor
I love this story, been absolutely binge reading it and now I’ve caught up! Can’t wait to continue!
06/17/2025 05:18Visitor
intriguing so far
06/16/2025 20:35Visitor
Amazing character interactions.
06/16/2025 19:09Visitor
interesting so far can't wait to read more
06/16/2025 13:34Visitor
good book so far, hope Ayla kicks Dallas ass at some point
06/15/2025 23:24Visitor
love this book, I keep wanting to read more
06/15/2025 21:06Veronica White
my updates will be late because of fathers day.
06/15/2025 20:04Visitor
Enjoying it so far. Hoping for Ayla's wolf to return soon and to get more of her backstory
06/15/2025 16:50Visitor
just love the book it seems we having a alpha omega mate bond
06/15/2025 14:00Emily Good
I am loving this!
06/14/2025 17:04Visitor
❤️
06/14/2025 09:53Visitor
i love love cyrus, im finding myself laughing out loud almost everytime he says something
06/13/2025 21:06Visitor
I love this book ❤️❤️❤️
06/13/2025 19:23Karen Beene Wise
I love it so far
06/13/2025 15:48Veronica White
My book updates will be later this evening.
06/13/2025 13:27Jennifer Suess
really good writing
06/13/2025 06:57Visitor
phenomenally thought out. fluid. fast paced and edgy
06/13/2025 05:02Visitor
good
06/13/2025 01:44Visitor
a really nice book
06/13/2025 00:07Emelie Frisk
a really good book
06/12/2025 23:09Visitor
love this! I can’t stop reading!
06/12/2025 18:35Visitor
I am truly looking forward to continue reading your story. I can honestly say you are a great and amazing writer and I truly enjoy reading your book so far. your story is very well written and I love It so far. im falling in love with the characters! keep up the great work and I look forward to keep reading your story! 😀
06/12/2025 02:05Veronica White
Author notes while editing: 1. Proof reading in the evening while I've had my bedtime "gummy vitamin" really was a horrible idea. 2. I apologize.
06/12/2025 00:22Veronica White
As I'm editing the story from the beginning, I think it is important to remember that: 1.Thane has NEVER had a relationship 2. He's broken and hurting/suppressing his grief and self-medicating with booze before Ayla (I know, not typical in a shifter story) 3. He is developing as a character as he helps Ayla through his trauma 4. All of the characters are growing for the better with each other, but it doesn't start off that way.
06/11/2025 23:57Veronica White
Attention: if you are looking for a wolf book that does not have a modern spin. (think fantasy with amenities but no cars phones etc.) I have Lia's Redemption. It starts slow with world building and quick spice buuuuuttttt that first plot twist is a big one. That is all.
06/11/2025 19:37Bezoeker
Just starting with this book i'm at chapter 8 and i can't wait to see what will happen
06/11/2025 19:02Veronica White
I have officially been approved to have my word count limit lifted. So now I can actually edit my chapters and I don't have to conform to their suggested word count.
06/11/2025 15:46Deneene L Krehlik
your mole is Della... you weren't around her a lot
06/11/2025 15:33Deneene L Krehlik
notices her scent hours after she left?.. but didn't know she was behind him when she walked in? ... not his mate... still think its a set up
06/11/2025 02:52Visitor
just atarted reading today and I am really liking the book so far. good story line and easy to follow. keep up the good work. thank you!!
06/10/2025 22:36Deneene L Krehlik
your chapters are like a skipping record... there are missing sentences and in getting confused as to where we are in the conversations... need to proof read please!
06/10/2025 18:57Visitor
can't wait to continue reading this book it is really good so far. really enjoying the story line
06/10/2025 18:09Visitor
just started this book but so far so good can't wait to read it all
06/10/2025 18:07Visitor
Hooked ,can not wait to start next chapter.. good job done!!
06/10/2025 17:35Veronica White
1. I have started the process of thoroughly editing the story. If you have been reading and following the story for a while, you know that I was under the impression that the editor the platform gave me was editing after I submitted to chapter. I was not aware that it went straight to the platforms. 2.You would also be aware that I comment daily that I can't go back and edit because they put a word count on me and it would cause the excess words in my earlier chapters to roll over into their own chapters, thus affecting people that unlock chapters. 3. I put in to be exempt from the word count limits but I can't take the daily comments about the editing. So, I'm starting the process then they have to be reviewed by the editor and changed. I think it is only three times a week they approve the changes. 4. No need to comment after each chapter that you don't like it. It just isn't the story for you. Find another.
06/10/2025 14:58Nicole Wheeler
only read a few chapters and im hooked, love your writing skills. can't wait to see how it ends
06/10/2025 10:18Bezoeker
this story is getting better and better with every chapter
06/10/2025 09:45Visitor
I am only a few chapters in but so far I can not wait to see what happens next.
06/09/2025 18:32Visitor
love it so far. can't wait to read more
06/08/2025 15:56Visitor
love it so far. wouldn't be good if Ayla was the alphas mate
06/08/2025 13:36Visitor
it's a spicy romance novel duh of course there's spicy sex
06/08/2025 09:19Visitor
Really enjoying this! Very sad topic but feeling hopeful for a happy story
06/07/2025 20:30Veronica White
***WARNING THIS IS A DARK, SPICY BOOK. DARK ROMANCE WITH PLOT. DARK. CHECK YOUR TRIGGERS***
06/07/2025 19:11Veronica White
IF you are looking for another read to fill in the gaps of OB, I have a second story started called "Lia's Redemption." It builds slowly but I just threw out a plot twist that had one reader commenting: "What the hell did I just read?!?" :)
06/07/2025 02:03Daniëlle van Eijk
awsome
06/06/2025 22:57Veronica White
I submit the chapter as soon as I write it and it is immediately sent to the five platforms that it is on. It will take me a while in between chapters to upload if I write more than one.
06/06/2025 21:43Veronica White
sorry the update took so long. the company's servers were down, and we couldn't upload!
06/06/2025 01:31Visitor
So far so good! I do wish dialogue was formatted a bit differently, but the story itself has my attention for sure. I am looking forward to seeing what happens.
06/05/2025 18:17Visitor
So far I'm only 9 chapters in and I'm already hooked!
06/05/2025 03:40Veronica White
I am trying to write today's chapter, but it is making me cry!
06/04/2025 20:30Cami Zink
I think it's an alright book so far we will see how it turns out
06/04/2025 12:28Veronica White
I'm mouring with ya'll and I wrote it!
06/03/2025 22:14Veronica White
I was going to do another chapter today, but I was almost done with one and I shut my laptop and it didn't save and auto save was off and I can't find it and I am too mad and disgusted to attempt to write it over right now.
06/02/2025 22:58Veronica White
Trying something new with a dual pov chapter because my brain changed the pov twice and I got tired of trying to fix it so apparently it is supposed to go down like this!
06/02/2025 21:45Visitor
very good book keeps me reading eagerly to find out what is going to happen next. love the caricature
05/29/2025 22:09Visitor
Really good read. Slow paced enough that you're not rushing through the story but not too slow that it's boring. Love this
05/29/2025 20:10Visitor
This book is amazing I cannot get enough of it.
05/29/2025 05:10Veronica White
I am going to try and update today. I have my daughter's 8th birthday party.
05/25/2025 17:46Rebecca McGrath
absolutely loving this.. has the right amount of everything in it. cant wait to read more.
05/24/2025 11:07Veronica White
FYI The company has initiated word limits for the chapters which is why I no longer do 1500-1800 word counts but I have no idea if my earlier chapters have a few paragraphs from each one that roll over into their own chapter because of the word limits. I apologize for the inconvenience and frustrations.
05/19/2025 22:18Veronica White
I found several issues with the larry's chapt. I submitted it to be fixed
05/17/2025 19:37Veronica White
Be sure to check out my new book on the Apps. It is called "Lia's Redemption."
05/16/2025 03:13Veronica White
Sorry my update is taking longer today. I started re-reading ACOTAR *insert laughing emoji*
05/14/2025 00:23Veronica White
The new book I am working on is now on the apps. Check out Lia's Redemption!
05/12/2025 18:14Veronica White
I will probably be unable to load chapters Saturday as I am a maid of honor in a wedding and will be gone all day, but I will try!
05/02/2025 17:30Veronica White
It has come to my attention that my Pen Name is also used by another Author that has written a lot of Karma Sutra books. We are not the same. Sorry!
04/28/2025 17:57Veronica White
Happy easter
04/20/2025 23:10
